Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]

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Re: Epilogue: Drabbles From the Reception

Post by Zoram » Tue Feb 14, 2012 3:00 am

themocaw wrote:A drabble is a story in one hundred words.

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[Did you know that Hideaki has a fan club at his high school?] Shizune signs.

[Don’t tell him about that!] Hideaki protests. [It’s embarrassing!]

[All of the girls in his high school sneak pictures of him while he’s out playing sports at PE. One of them even tried to steal some of his clothes out of his locker. Every time he opens up his shoe locker, there’s at least three love letters in there.]

[Disgraceful! You should be focusing on your studies, not allowing yourself to be distracted by young women with no morals! It makes me sick!]

[Relax, Dad. . .]
Well that's heartwarming :oops: Only, how many years have passed since the events of KS exactly? I tought Hideaki would be already at uni by this point, but personally I suppose he's 13 in the game, but he might be younger (is there a canon age for him?)

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Post by gecko » Tue Feb 14, 2012 5:38 pm

Kenji is so... :lol:
99% completion.
Mind-worm meter: Rin>>Emi>Lily>Hanako>>Shizune
Fanfic: The lamb and the fox

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Re: Epilogue: Drabbles From the Reception

Post by Otakumon » Tue Feb 14, 2012 8:14 pm

Zoram wrote:
themocaw wrote:A drabble is a story in one hundred words.

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[Did you know that Hideaki has a fan club at his high school?] Shizune signs.

[Don’t tell him about that!] Hideaki protests. [It’s embarrassing!]

[Girls in his high school sneak pictures of him while he’s playing sports at PE. One of them even tried to steal some of his clothes from his locker. Every time he opens up his shoe locker, there’s at least three love letters in there.]

[Disgraceful! You should be focusing on your studies, not allowing yourself to be distracted by young women with no morals! It makes me sick!]

[Relax, Dad. . .the letters are from boys.]
Well that's heartwarming :oops: Only, how many years have passed since the events of KS exactly? I tought Hideaki would be already at uni by this point, but personally I suppose he's 13 in the game, but he might be younger (is there a canon age for him?)
Fixed it for you. 8) Sorry, couldn't resist. :mrgreen:

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Post by scott1and » Thu Feb 16, 2012 4:58 pm

Really enjoyed this story. And the wedding was great, even though I think I missed a lot of references when talking about Shizune's side of the wedding :mrgreen: The drabble was good as always too, and for the love of god, don't stop writing :D
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Post by bradpara » Fri Feb 17, 2012 10:32 pm

Wonderful, inspired me to do a little writing of my own probably just a WAFF one shot (proof reader welcome, please PM)
Shizune=Hanako>Lilly>Emi=Rin
Family Game Night A Shizune After Story Fic
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Post by tsunami_state » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:30 am

It's quite funny that what started as "Rated M for Manly" fic became such a heart-warming Shizu story. Definitely gets "Approved" stamp. And "Head-canon" stamp too :)

As for drabbles... All of them are so funny! (Misha's and Hideaki's ones FTW!) And you contained all that awesomeness in 100 words or less! What is your archiver by the way?

And the last thing: to describe my approvement of porn scenes in the fic...
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Hanako & Lilly - The Heartwreckers
Emi & Rin - The WTF takers
Shizune & Misha - The Sexy ones *woflwhistle*

Hanako = Lilly >= Emi >= Shizune
No Rin 'cuz didn't play her route yet o_O

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Post by themocaw » Sun Feb 19, 2012 12:19 pm

tsunami_state wrote: What is your archiver by the way?[/img]
Ar. . . chiver? I have no idea what you mean by that.

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Post by andros414 » Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:04 am

themocaw wrote:
tsunami_state wrote: What is your archiver by the way?[/img]
Ar. . . chiver? I have no idea what you mean by that.
Feels like a computer joke to me, about how you compressed such great stories into less than 100 words for your drabbles. (Archiver is a word I've heard used in reference to file compression programs, such as 7zip or winRAR.)

Compressed or not, excellent writing. So glad I found this after you finished writing it, one of my biggest peeves is having to wait for new chapters in a great story. >.<

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Post by tsunami_state » Sat Feb 25, 2012 9:22 am

Heh... Didn't know that joke was so hard to catch up *sweat-drop*
Yup, I meant what program did you use to compress them. Don't answer, it's rhetorical :D
Hanako & Lilly - The Heartwreckers
Emi & Rin - The WTF takers
Shizune & Misha - The Sexy ones *woflwhistle*

Hanako = Lilly >= Emi >= Shizune
No Rin 'cuz didn't play her route yet o_O

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Post by CarnivalNights » Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:09 pm

Just finished reading all the chapters.

T'was wonderful.
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Post by YOTC » Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:31 am

I'm another one of those people who made an account to come say that they enjoyed this. I felt that i understood Shizune's arc fairly well before this, but christ man, putting a cap on it like this makes me understand her so much better.

Every time I read something as good as this it makes me slightly sad as I've already 100%ed the game and am now just searching for more feels as I haven't had anything kick my teeth in like this in AGES.

Out of curiousity did you also write the Final reunion and Hazelnut Filling I've seen floating around in a google doc? As those were also pretty good.

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Post by themocaw » Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:59 pm

YOTC wrote:Out of curiousity did you also write the Final reunion and Hazelnut Filling I've seen floating around in a google doc? As those were also pretty good.
Nope. All my stuff is on the forums or in pastebins.

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Post by BeastlyFerret » Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:32 pm

I've compiled a list of FanFiction for Shizune's good ending. Please let me know what you think Themocaw, you're a genius :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Efj ... edit?pli=1

Edit: Is it all right if the google doc stays up also?
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Shizune=Emi=Lilly=Hanako=Rin=Saki=Rika=Misha=Miki Because all girls are equal and deserve equal amounts of love. However, these girls appeal to me the most~

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Post by BeastlyFerret » Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:33 pm

YOTC wrote:I'm another one of those people who made an account to come say that they enjoyed this. I felt that i understood Shizune's arc fairly well before this, but christ man, putting a cap on it like this makes me understand her so much better.

Every time I read something as good as this it makes me slightly sad as I've already 100%ed the game and am now just searching for more feels as I haven't had anything kick my teeth in like this in AGES.

Out of curiousity did you also write the Final reunion and Hazelnut Filling I've seen floating around in a google doc? As those were also pretty good.
Lol that's me xD
Shizune=Emi=Lilly=Hanako=Rin=Saki=Rika=Misha=Miki Because all girls are equal and deserve equal amounts of love. However, these girls appeal to me the most~

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Post by WolfStreak » Wed Feb 29, 2012 12:53 am

Could not help but notice, a few of the guests, Italian looking? with children huh? sounds like a reference to a certain manga/anime with assassins. Great story double thumbs up!
Streak as in streaking by at the speed of light.
Not the naked kind of streak...
That would just be odd >.>

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