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Post by Mirage_GSM » Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:48 pm

Here's Chapter Three. Enjoy :D


Chapter Three – Something There
Half an hour later my most urgent questions have been addressed. Apparently, I am going to be an Abjurer - a mage who specializes in countering the effects of harmful magic. The nurse has left in the meantime to look after the other new mages, while Kanzaki and Takeshi do their best to satisfy my curiosity.

After a glance at his watch, Kanzaki rises from my chair. “Well, we should go now. You can rest for a bit, but please be at the principal's office at five - that is in two hours. You'll meet the other students and the new teachers then.”

I nod and they head for the door. As they step into the hallway, Takeshi stops abruptly. “Kozo... I think there is one more...”

“One more? You mean an eighth potential mage? Why didn't you notice him sooner?”

“Well, Hisao's aura was pretty strong, but now that I've gotten used to it, I'm able to tune it out.” He hesitates for a moment. “Who's living over there?” he asks, pointing at Kenji's door.

He has got to be kidding me. I don't even want to imagine Kenji with the ability to throw fireballs all over the place... No, he seems to be serious. “Uh, that's the room of Kenji Setou... But, you know, he is a bit...” I grope for the right word. “...eccentric.”

Takeshi looks at me with a puzzled expression.

“You'll see when you meet him.”

Kanzaki walks past us and knocks at Kenji's door. “Maybe you should stay with us. It might be easier for him to accept this, if a friend is around.”

Somehow I doubt that will be the problem, but before I can say anything, there is the sound of half a dozen locks being pulled back and the door opens just a tiny bit. “Who's there?”

“Hey Kenji, it's me, Hisao.”

The door opens completely. “Hey, bro, wassup?” He squints. “And who are those people with you?”

For a moment I hesitate, but this is Kenji for god's sake. “They are mages, and they are looking for other potential mages to train. They think you might be one and would like to do some tests.”

Both Kanzaki and Takeshi look at me as if I had lost my mind but Kenji grins. “I KNEW it! I bet they are fighting against the great feminist conspiracy and are looking for people to join the cause. I knew I couldn't be the last man fighting, or they would have won the war already.” He stops. “Although that means, I'm not the last sane man at all, which is quite a disappointment...”

I sigh in exasperation. Leave it to Kenji to simply accept something like that as if it were the most natural thing in the world. I tune back into Kenji's rambling.

“...Wait!” An expression of horror enters his face. “If you can do magic, then there have to be witches who can do so as well. Damn, that explains EVERYTHING!” He drifts off into incoherent mumbling.

Kanzaki turns to Takeshi. “I think that young man has gone into a shock. Please call for medical assistance again.”

“Don't worry. This is par for the course with Kenji. He's always like that.”

Kanzaki raises one of his eyebrows. “A severe case of gynophobia, is it? That could be a problem... Mr Setou?”

Kenji stops his mumbling to squint at Kanzaki. “Yes? So there are witches as well as mages, and you need my help to fight them, correct?”

“Not as such Mr. Setou. There are indeed female practitioners of magic, but we use the term 'mage' for both males and females. Also, there are rarely any fights...”

“No, no, NO! If they seem peaceful, that is only a ploy to deceive you. You have to get organized. It's a good thing you found me before it is too late... Maybe it already is too late. Aaargh. We can't waste any more time...”

Kanzaki shows the beginnings of a serious headache, and I can sympathize with that. “Well, I can see we will have a lot to talk about, Mr. Setou, but first let us find out what your affinity is.” He produces another ring from his lab-coat and explains its significance to Kenji.

Kenji grabs the ring and without hesitation slips it onto his finger. The stone in the socket changes into a deep black onyx.

I stare at the ring, waiting for the explanation. When none is forthcoming, I turn to the two mages. Takeshi has reached for the door-frame for support and looks close to fainting. Those parts of Kanzaki's face that are not covered by his beard have turned an ashen grey.

Takeshi fights to regain his composure. “This has to be a mistake. That ring is defective...”

“No, Takeshi, it is not, and you know it. We have to face the fact that this young man here is a Necromancer.”

***

After that, I am sent back to my room without further explanation. I try to get some rest like Kanzaki recommended, but I can't sleep. I didn't really expect that to work anyway.

I get up and head over to the auxiliary building. Might as well get that EKG over with before the meeting with those other future mages. I wonder if it's anyone I know? Someone from my class? Maybe – and my mood brightens considerably at the thought – maybe one of them is Misha.

Lost in thought, I arrive at the nurse's office. I just reach for the handle when the door is opened from the inside and I find myself face to face with Emi.

She jumps back a step. “H-Hisao, you surprised me.”

“I'm sorry, I just came here for an examination. I wasn't...” I trail off, as I notice something that wasn't there before. On her right hand there is now a ring. A plain silver band with a sapphire set into it.

Emi notices my gaze. Her first impulse is to hide her hand behind her back, but then I hold out my own hand. “Hisao! You're a mage, too?”

“I'll thank you to keep your voice down, Emi.” The nurse appears behind her. “We wouldn't want the whole school to know about that, do we? Well, there goes my surprise. I wanted to see your face when you meet him later at the principal's office...”

Emi pouts, but the nurse just waves her away. “You know that doesn't work on me, and now please go and find Mr. Nomiya. We don't want him to be late. You can talk to Hisao all you want later.”

Emi reluctantly agrees. “Okay. See you later Hisao!” She flashes me a huge grin, before she dashes down the hallway.

As the nurse ushers me into his office, I notice the ring on his hand. Earlier, I must have been too confused to notice, but it features the same light blue gemstone that Emi's ring had.

Guessing the question that's on my mind, he starts giving the answer himself. “Emi is going to be a Conjurer, like myself.” He grins sheepishly. “Although I never had that much magical talent. I can teach her the theory of course, but I wouldn't be surprised, if she surpasses me before this year is over. I'm not really here as a magic-teacher but for my medical skills. Still, Kozo... Mr. Kanzaki decided that I should teach Emi myself rather than sending another Conjurer to Yamaku. There are going to be enough new teachers already. Any more would be suspicious.”

“So what exactly can a conjurer do?”

He motions for me to take off my shirt and lie down on the bed. “Conjuration is a very versatile art. Of course there is the generic summoning... Rabbits from hats, doves from cloths and stuff like that. You've probably seen that on TV before. Real Conjurers rarely do that stuff, because those animals have to come from somewhere, and every time you do it, some little girl somewhere loses a pet.”

“The second school of Conjuration is Translocation.” He waves his hands and a set of electrodes rises from a pack on his desk and floats towards his hands. While he places them on my chest and connects them to the EKG, he continues explaining. “This includes simple forms of telekinesis as well as the ability to hover or fly or - for experienced mages - teleportation.” He pauses and turns on the EKG.

“I can do that only over very short distances, like a few metres, but it helped me get to you quickly earlier. I was lucky to be just on the floor below you at the time, so I just had to go straight up.” He stares intently at the lines appearing on his screen. “Summoning is actually nothing more than a very specialized form of teleportation where you cannot control the source of the creature or object.”

“The third and most difficult school is Creation. You create something from nothing. Nothing loud and flashy like an Evoker can, but with more control. I never had much talent for creation. I can create enough flame to light a candle or enough water to douse it, but a skilled Creator can produce complex objects, works of art or even large amounts of matter.”

He smiles at me. “You are going to be an Abjurer. Abjurers actually have techniques that are similar to Creation.”

“I thought Abjurers could only remove the effects of magic.”

“That's a part of it, but once your training is complete, you will also be able to protect yourself or others from the effects of magic. Abjurers can set up barriers of magical force that will stop most anything from harming you. You cannot create actual matter, but while a Creator could theoretically Conjure a wall of stone, it would take too long to be effective in battle.”

That's something nobody has mentioned yet. “Battle? You mean there really is stuff like mages throwing fireballs at each other?”

He grimaces and tries to evade the subject. “In every society there are law abiding citizens and there are criminals. Many Abjurers pursue a career in law-enforcements, but there are plenty of other avenues that are open to you. In fact, given your condition, I would strongly advise against trying to be a heroic crime-fighter.”

That actually makes me laugh, and his smile is back like it was never gone. “Now, you try lying still for a few more minutes, or the EKG will show some very strange results. Once we are done here we can go to the meeting together.”

***

It is a quarter to five and I am on my way to the principal's office. The nurse had to stay behind because of a last minute patient and told me he might be a few minutes late and I should go on ahead.

After I leave, I remember I've never been to the principal's office before, so I wander the hallways of the auxiliary building looking for the right place. Damn. I really should get to know this school better sooner rather than later. I am close to giving up and returning to the nurse's office for directions when I spot two familiar figures walking around the corner in front of me.

Misha spots me as well and starts to wave. “Hey, Hicchan, what are you doing here?”

“I'm looking for the principal's office. Do you know where it is?”

“The principal's office? Why do you want to go there? Don't tell me...” As soon as she starts translating for Shizune, I notice a flash of red on her finger, and it seems Misha has also realized the reason why I am here. She grabs my hand with her own and stares at my ring. “So you are also a mage? This is so cool! Now the whole student council will be powerful mages. Wahahaha~!”

“So you've got a red ring. What kind of mage are you going to be?”

“That Kanzaki guy told me it means I am an Evoker. It sounds cool, don't you think?”

I am reminded of what the nurse said about Evokers being loud and flashy. I have no trouble understanding how that could be Misha's affinity.

As I stand there wondering, I notice that Misha is still holding my hand. I feel the blood shoot to my face and try to pull my hand away, while Misha starts to giggle and tries to grab it again.

We are interrupted when two arms appear between us, pushing us apart. We look up to find Shizune staring at us angrily and signing with gestures fit to chop something apart. Misha stops giggling and translates “Stop fooling around. We're going to be late for the meeting. Yes, I'm sorry Shicchan.” The grin doesn't leave her face though.

As I fall into step next to the two of them, I take a closer look at Shizune's ring. It features an amethyst of a deep violet colour. “So, what about you, Shizune? What did they tell you about your talent?”

Shizune straightens her glasses and begins to reply. “I - that is Shicchan - am going to be an Enchantress. Enchanters can influence the minds and memories of others. Mr. Kanzaki didn't tell me too much yet, but he said it was an ability that requires a lot of control and responsibility. Well, Shicchan, it's perfect for you then. WAHAHAHA!”

She stops in front of a door and Misha knocks so hard I picture the door coming crashing down. A moment later Kanzaki's voice bids us to enter.

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Please look forward to chapter four:
The Gospel Truth
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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by GG Crono » Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:54 am

Interesting premise you've got going there. Since you're just setting things up at the moment, I can't say much about the story. However, it's as good a way to present the obligatory infodump as any, so it's good that you're getting that out of the way. And on the technical side of things, you write quite well. Is English your second language? If so, color me doubly impressed, as you have a better grasp of it than many natives I've met. :)

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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Shades of gray » Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:33 am

I see potential here....

Kenji as a necromancer is... oddly enough amusing and worrying... "I SHALL BUILD MY OWN UNDEAD ARMY TO BATTLE THE FEMINISTS!"

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Post by Mirage_GSM » Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:52 am

Chapter four is going to be more info dump and the introduction of the last important characters (for now). The story is going to be more important in chapter five.
And yes, English is not my native language, but since I was fourteen, I've been doing most of my reading in english, and after some 250 novels (rough estimate) you pick up a thing or two...
Still, my writing experience so far was mostly confined to translation work, editing the texts of others and what amounts to a historical treatise for a fantasy campaign I was playing.
The stories in these forums are so far my first experiences with creative writing (except for two shorts I wrote years back in my native German) so I think there is still plenty of room for me to improve. Any suggestions to that end are very welcome.
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Post by Silentcook » Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:16 pm

Don't crossover. Ever.

Though this may be a bit late, wouldn't it.
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Post by Mirage_GSM » Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:50 pm

I didn't crossover (not in this story anyway) nor do I intend to.
All characters in this story that are not from KS are my own. Similarities with other characters - real or imagined - are not intentional.
If you were referring to "Victory Days" then I have to plead guilty as charged...
I dislike doing crossovers just for the sake of shipping your favourite characters, but I don't want to rule out doing them in future stories for comedic effect.
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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Guest » Sun Dec 12, 2010 9:35 pm

Silentcook wrote:Don't crossover. Ever.
Did this even need to be said? Even if this was a crossover, I don't see what potential problems this would make unless it was a troll-post like that one Twilight fic. If readers aren't familiar with all the works involved then they'll... just not read it and the story will just fade into the shadows and not bother anybody.

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Post by Silentcook » Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:23 pm

To make things a little more clear:

-Crossover does not only refer to writing discrete already-estabilished characters together, but also to writing different settings or "worlds" together - even if only the characters from one of the two sides ever appear.
Joining two separate, contemporary highschool romance franchises is a crossover; so is joining a hard SF story with a supernatural horror story.
Perhaps I should have said "don't cross-genre-over", but I doubt it would have been better... I don't think it's even a word.

-There are no "potential problems" present anywhere here. I am merely responding to the call for suggestions to improve.
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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Guest » Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:29 am

I'm recognizing a lot of Dungeons and Dragons terminology. Abjurers, Evokers, Conjurers, all specialist mages from 3.5 Edition.

Or am I off base?

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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Guest » Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:30 am

I'm recognizing a lot of Dungeons and Dragons terminology. Abjurers, Evokers, Conjurers, all specialist mages from 3.5 Edition.

Or am I off base?

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Post by Mirage_GSM » Mon Dec 13, 2010 4:12 am

Yes, the names of the magic schools are the same as in AD&D, but don't expect the characters to make a visit to Faerûn anytime soon. The magic they're using is distinctly different from AD&D, and this is not a crossover with any pre-established setting.
My apologies to SC, though... It really is too late to remove the fantasy elements from this story...
Whether or not this is a bad thing is - in my opinion - a matter of taste. I've read or seen stories that did very well mixing Fantasy and SciFi (Scrapped Princess comes to mind) and others that failed horribly (the Rayearth OVA)...
In this case - and I know that is but a technicality - I didn't even mix two settings. I changed the KS-setting to include Fantasy elements. The genre will remain focussed on romance for as far as I have planned ahead until now, so this is going to be a Fantasy Romance like for example Shuffle.

And while I'm at it, I might as well post chapter four:

Chapter Four – The Gospel Truth
We enter a large office that obviously doubles as a conference room. There's a huge desk against the opposite wall, which is empty except for a few neatly stacked piles of paper. A few shelves line the wall behind it.

The rest of the room is taken up by a huge conference table with room for about twenty people. Kanzaki is sitting at its head, reading some files spread out in front of him. Takeshi is sitting at his right and Kenji at his left. The latter looks sufficiently cowed. I don't know what he did to get him quiet, but he has to teach me the trick...

At the window overlooking the school-yard, Mr. Mutou is talking to Ms. Miyagi and a young woman with red dyed hair. Ms. Miyagi is holding a lit cigarette in her right hand and a small portable ashtray in her left. Mutou nods to me absently.

“H-Hisao!”

I turn around and see two more people standing in the corner. “Hanako, Lilly! You're here as well?”

Hanako doesn't reply, but Lilly turns our way. “My my, Hisao. So you are a mage as well?

“Yes. I'm here with Misha and Shizune. Emi is going to be here as well, and... Oh yes, Mr. Kanzaki, the nurse had a patient to care for. He said to start without him, if he couldn't make it in time.”

Kanzaki looks up and greets us with a smile. “Ah yes, that won't be a problem. I think everyone here knows him, so he won't need any introductions...”

The door flies open and Emi storms into the room, followed by Rin and an elderly man with grey hair and a garishly coloured blazer. I've seen him around the campus once or twice. He has to be a teacher, probably that Mr. Nomiya she was supposed to find.

Kanzaki closes the file he was reading and rises. “It seems everyone is here now, so we can begin. Everybody please take your seats!”

I sit down next to Takeshi, and Misha plops down next to me. Shizune is across the table from us, probably so she can see Misha's translation of what is discussed.

When everyone has found a seat, Kanzaki speaks up again. “I welcome you all to this year's inauguration of magic students. My name is Kozo Kanzaki, and I am very pleased that this year is the largest class since the foundation of this school, and it is also one with a very wide range of talents, which is why we decided to bring in a few more teachers.

“As you know next to nothing about magic, I will start with a brief explanation of the schools of magic and introduce your new teachers along with their subject.”

He clears his throat and continues. “The ability to use magic is something you are born with, though it is not hereditary. In most people it lies dormant for their whole lives unless it is awoken by something.” He looks at me with an undefinable expression. “In your cases that would be you living in Yamaku for an extended time, because Yamaku is a place where several ley-lines – streams of magical energy – cross.”

“The art of magic is divided into seven schools. Every mage can use magic of one school only, regardless of talent or willingness to study. Those schools are Abjuration, Conjuration, Divination, Enchantment, Evocation, Illusion and Transmutation.”

“The most common school is Conjuration. Almost one in four mages is a Conjurer, although Conjuration has a very broad range of abilities, and only very few master them all.” He continues his explanation, but I tune him out, as the nurse already told me about this. Instead I wonder why he said seven schools. Didn't he say earlier that Kenji was a Necromancer – whatever that means?

My attention comes back to what Kanzaki is saying. “There is only one Conjurer among you students. Ms Emi Ibarazaki.” Emi flashes a wide grin. “She will be taught by Mr. ...”

The door opens and the nurse enters the room. “She will be taught by me. Good evening everyone, and I'm sorry I'm late.” He sits down on one of the empty chairs.

When everything has quieted down again, Kanzaki continues. “Next there are Diviners. Diviners have the ability to read minds, send mental messages, scry faraway places and in some cases they can see across time into the past or even the future. This young man is Takeshi Takakura, a very talented Diviner and himself an Alumni of this school. He will be the teacher of Ms. Lilly Satou.”

Takeshi grins at Lilly. “I'm sure you will find that Divination is a great compensation for not being able to see with your eyes.”

Lilly smiles but doesn't say anything, so Kanzaki continues. “Evokers are the third kind of mages that are quite common. They are able to manipulate energy and the forces of nature. As such their abilities are best suited for magical combat should it be required, but there are also a lot of more peaceful professions open to them. I don't have to introduce Mr. Mutou, as all of you already know him. It will be his responsibility to teach Ms. Shiina Mikado to be a responsible Evoker.”

I don't have to be a Diviner to hear the mental groan emitted by Mutou at that declaration, but Misha just flashes a big grin at him. “I bet this is going to be a lot of fun. I'm going to give it my best!” Mutou rubs his temples with both hands, obviously fighting the beginnings of a headache.

Suppressing a grin, Kanzaki turns to Rin. “Illusionists are less common among mages. They can create images to either entertain or deceive onlookers. This may seem trivial, but powerful Illusionists learn to influence all the senses of an individual. They can lock someone up in a completely imaginary world of their own creation, and it takes a very strong mind to tell Illusion from reality. Mr. Shinichi Nomiya is Yamaku's resident Illusionist and will oversee the education of Ms. Rin Tezuka.”

Rin merely nods in acknowledgement. I'd very much like to know what she thinks about this whole magic stuff, but in all likelihood, I wouldn't be able to follow her thought processes anyway.

“Enchanters have power over the minds of other creatures. They can force others to do things against their will. Obviously that is an ability that is very prone to exploitation, but there are many benign applications, ranging from domesticating and training animals to assisting the police in defusing hostage situations. Ms. Ayaka Aikawa here,” he motions to the young red-haired woman, who was talking to Mr. Mutou and Ms. Miyagi earlier, “usually works as a social worker helping criminals to reintegrate back into society.”

Shizune's face clouds over at that statement, but Kanzaki continues before she can explode. “We chose her as a teacher for Ms. Shizune Hakamichi, because she is also proficient in sign language which will facilitate their lessons considerably.”

Ms. Aikawa flashes a few signs to Shizune, grinning broadly and to my astonishment, Shizune deflates immediately, a surprised expression on her face. I look at Misha questioningly, but she just shrugs. Maybe she was looking the wrong way to catch the gestures.

“Transmuters are quite rare and have a wide range of abilities. They can alter the form and makeup of matter. They can shape stone using only magic and quite literally change lead into gold. Transmutation of living beings is also possible but mostly used on the Transmuter himself for changing into animal form or growing protective scales. Transmutaion of others is very dangerous and often causes accidents. It is considered a crime to transmute another human against his will.”

He looks sternly at Hanako, who tries to sink even deeper into her chair in response. “Ms. Hanako Ikezawa, your teacher will be Ms. Mikoto Miyagi, also a teacher at your school.” Lilly grabs Hanako's hand reassuringly and whispers something in her ear, which causes Hanako to relax somewhat. I am glad that she won't have to study under Kanzaki. He seems to be a nice person, but I can see how his stern manner would terrify Hanako to no end.

As if noticing me looking at him, Kanzaki turns to me. “And finally there is the seventh school of magic: Abjuration. While all mages who are properly trained and who aren't careless have the ability to undo their own magic – and to a limited extent the magic of other mages of their school – Abjurers are the only ones who can suppress, remove or undo the effects of all schools of magic. Abjurers are very rare. Only about one in a hundred mages has the talent to be an Abjurer, and they are much sought after as bodyguards of important politicians, or to remove the effects of magical accidents like failed transmutations.”

“I will enroll at this school as a new history teacher to handle part of his training myself.” I look at him, surprised at the 'part of'. He smiles at me. “As you are going to have to deal with all schools of magic, a large part of your training will be together with the other young mages here. In fact, you are very lucky to be able to practice your skills together with students of all other six schools.”

The room falls silent for a moment. Fourteen pairs of eyes converge on the one person in the room that has not been addressed until now. Kenji fidgets on his chair nervously.

After a while Kanzaki speaks up again. “Which brings us to Mr Setou here...” He takes a deep breath. All the adult mages are wearing very solemn expressions. “I told you before that there are seven schools of magic. That is not entirely correct. In the past, there used to be an eighth school of magic – Necromancy or Dark Magic as it was often called. Necromancers had terrifying powers, powers that could control life and death. They are the source of numerous legends that survive to this day, the best known being that of Count Vlad Dracul.”

Several gasps are audible at this statement, and I can feel a shiver running down my spine. Then I feel Misha grabbing my arm and clinging tightly to it, and I hope Kanzaki has even more frightening stories in store for us. He doesn't disappoint me. “Other Necromancers were responsible for the Death of the Egyptian Firstborn around 1600 BCE, the assassination of Alexander the Great in 323 BCE, the outbreak of the Black Death in Europe in 1348 and the Zombie Plague in Haiti in the 19th century.”

“The last known Necromancer was killed in 1879 in China after causing a famine that killed 13 million people. He was brought low by a team of two dozen powerful mages and half of them lost either their lives or their sanity during the battle.”

Kanzaki's gaze drifts across the room, lingering briefly on each of us, noting our reactions which range from fear to loathing. “Now, you may wonder why we don't simply lock away an individual who is potentially that dangerous and throw away the key. I am sure there are going to be mages advocating this course of action rather strongly. The reason lies in a question young Mr. Nakai here asked of us earlier today.”

Everyone's gazes shift to me and I squirm uncomfortably, while trying to remember which question he could be referring to. “He asked why we don't use our magic to heal the illnesses of all the students here. The answer was that this is something magic cannot do, and until three hours ago we believed it to be true. None of the seven magic schools can restore sight to the blind, regrow lost limbs or fix defective organs.”

“But as I told you earlier, according to the ancient reports, a Necromancer has power not only over death but also over life. It is entirely possible that all this could be possible for someone like Mr. Setou here.”

He pauses for a moment to let his words sink in. “So before this meeting, I contacted the council – that is the ruling body of the mages – and convinced them to have Mr. Setou educated to be a full fledged mage. Obviously his progress will be carefully supervised, and even more obviously there isn't any Necromancer around to teach him. That is why I will be responsible for teaching him as best as I am able. As an Abjurer I have at least trained the basics of how to counter Necromancy should those skills ever be needed again.”

I try to picture Kenji as a great benevolent healer but fail utterly. I fear that, should his powers ever get out of control, men might soon find themselves doomed to a solitary existence. Would a potential cure for my affliction and those of all the others here really be worth that kind of risk? I resolve to talk to Kanzaki about my misgivings later, but for now I just listen to what else he has to say. The rest of the meeting is not very interesting, mainly focusing on organisational matters like how to fit our extracurricular lessons into and around our class schedule and club activities.

After one more hour, Kanzaki dissolves the meeting, leaving each of us to our own devices. For my part, I am completely exhausted after a night of too little sleep and a day full of surprises and revelations. I return to my room and quickly fall into a deep and regrettably dreamless sleep.

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Please look forward to chapter five:
Poor Unfortunate Souls
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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Mirage_GSM » Wed Dec 15, 2010 6:45 pm

Time for a new chapter...

Chapter Five – Poor Unfortunate Souls
My sleep is cut short by my alarm clock again. Running with Emi. I hope I get used to this someday. While I count out the pills I have to take, I remember that crazy dream I was having. Something about mages and... There's something on my hand... A ring set with a diamond. Damn, it wasn't a dream after all.

I quickly get dressed and leave the room. As I am about to close my door, Kenji's door suddenly opens and Kenji jumps out. “Hey bro!”

I nearly go into cardiac arrest from the shock. He must have been waiting for me to exit my room. “Hello Kenji, what's with the outfit?”

Kenji is wearing a black curtain draped over his school uniform. “Can't you see it, bro? That's a mage's robe, a fitting garb for a Necromancer. If I'm going to be a mage, I've gotta do it with style.” He winks at me conspiratorially. “I am also wearing my magical hat.”

A shiver runs down my spine again as I think about what Kanzaki told us about Necromancers. I'm even less in the mood for a talk with Kenji this morning than usual. “Well, whatever... I think you should ditch the robe. Totally messes up your cover.” I pause. “The hat should be okay, though.”

Kenji considers that. “Yes, I didn't think of that. Very shrewd of you. Can't have the bitches know too much...”

He trails off. I glance at my watch. “Is there something else? I have to get out to the track for my exercises. Nurse’s orders you know...” I think I'd better not mention Emi.”

He turns his attention back to me. “Ah, right, right, don't let me detain you. Just wanted to tell you that Kanzaki guy is a real bad-ass. Good to have him on our side. He's still a bit naïve about the dangers of the feminists, but I'm going to convince him sooner or later. With him on our side, we actually have a chance of winning...”

With that he retreats into his room again and locks the door. I just shake my head in disbelief and head out to the track.

***

As I arrive at the track, Emi is already running again. I wonder if I will ever manage to be here before her. When does she get here anyway? I do some warm-up exercises until Emi passes by me and lightly fall into step next to her.

Emi slows down to my pace. “Morning, Hisao! Did you sleep well?”

I grin sheepishly. “Actually I was so tired yesterday that I went to bed immediately after the meeting and slept until this morning. I feel better than I have in a long time.”

Emi chuckles. “Good for you then. I was so excited that I had a hard time falling asleep. I spent all evening trying to get bunnies to appear from my sports-bag, but I got zilch. There has to be a trick they didn't tell us about yet.”

“Well, it figures. If it were too easy, you'd probably have done something by accident sometime.”

She seems to ponder this. “It can't be too hard either. Someone must have discovered magic for the first time without anyone to teach him.”

I shrug the problem away. “It's probably no good agonizing about it. It will probably be one of the first things you'll learn in your lessons. You'll start this afternoon after school?”

“Yes. The nurse has his own office, so we can practice there. Where will your lessons be?”

“I don't know yet. Mr. Kanzaki said he was going to find himself a suitable office and get me at my classroom once lessons are finished.”

By now my breath has become a bit short from running and talking simultaneously and I fall silent.

Sensing my problem, Emi grins. “Don't overdo it, Hisao. Try to finish this lap and that's enough for today. In case you didn't notice: You did one more than yesterday.” With that she accelerates and leaves me eating her dust.

I run a hundred meters more, before stopping and slowly making my way back to the dorms and heading for the showers.

***

Twenty minutes later, I leave the shower feeling refreshed once more and return to my room to get dressed. The corridor is still empty. If I'm quiet, I won't run into Kenji again.

As I arrive at my room, I notice the door is not locked. Damn. I must have forgotten to lock it when Kenji surprised me earlier. I slip into my room closing the door quickly and silently before noticing that I am not alone. I freeze at the sight of the person sitting at my desk staring out my window.

Right at this moment, Misha turns around and sees me standing at the door, clad in only a towel. Her face turns a deep red, and for the first time she seems at a loss for words. I drop the bundle of clothes I was carrying over my arm into a corner and reach for the towel, making absolutely sure it won't slip. Still I am acutely aware of the scars plainly visible on my chest.

“Hisao!” She rises abruptly.” I... I'm sorry, the door was open, and I didn't want to wait in the corridor, because I might run into someone, and... I'm sorry. I'll leave you alone now.”

She makes for the door, but I grab her arm as she tries to pass by me. “No! Please don't.” She looks at me with surprise and I feel my face getting hot as well. “I mean... Please just give me a minute to get dressed.”

Misha steps outside and closes the door behind her. I race to find some fresh clothes to wear, get dressed in record time and open the door again. Misha is still waiting outside. Now that my first panic has subsided, I notice that she has been crying. Her eyes are red and the light make-up she's wearing is smudged.

“I'm sorry to make you wait outside, please come in.”

“No, I'm sorry. I shouldn't have entered your room without asking.”

“It's okay, really.” I motion for the bed and she sits down on its edge, while I sit down on my chair and swivel it around to face her. “So what's on your mind? You don't seem like yourself today.”

Misha doesn't immediately answer. Instead her hand reaches up to my chest to trace the scars that are now hidden beneath my shirt. My first instinct is to draw back, but after a second I relax. It's no use denying anything anyway. “Those scars...” she begins hesitantly, “there's something wrong with your heart, isn't there?”

I nod. “Yes. It's called Arrhythmia. Basically it could stop anytime I overexert myself.”

She sighs. “I thought so. Shizune read the names of some of those bottles over there last Friday and looked them up later.”

Usually, I would be irritated by such an admission, but something in the tone of her voice keeps me calm. Also... “But that's not why you're here, is it?” I ask her gently.

She shakes her head. Instead of answering she takes a photo from a pocket and hands it to me. The photo shows a young girl of about twelve years sitting in a hospital bed. She is completely bald and the scrawniest girl I've ever seen. Her twig-like arms look like they could break in a soft breeze, and her dull eyes stare listlessly into the camera.

I open my mouth to ask her who that girl is, then I close it again as realization hits me. Wide-eyed I stare at the girl sitting across from me, who bears so little resemblance to the girl in the photo. Wordlessly, Misha lifts the hem of her blouse a few centimetres to expose a set of surgical scars across her abdomen.

Tonelessly she begins to talk, staring at nothing. “It's called a Sarcoma, a specific type of cancer. I was thirteen when I was diagnosed with it. The next two years were living hell. I went through chemotherapy and three surgical procedures. In one of them they cut out most of my uterus. By then I didn't care. I just wanted it to be over one way or the other. That photo was taken the day my doctors told me that I was going to live. My parents took it, hoping to see me smile that day, but I couldn't... I just couldn't.”

She takes a deep breath. “After I had recovered sufficiently, I was sent here, so the doctors could keep a close eye on me... That was three years ago. I met Shicchan, we became friends... You know the rest.”

She looks into my eyes, tears running down her face. “This morning the nurse had me come to his office to discuss the results of the latest tests. The sarcoma is back. I'm going to have to go through all of this again, and this time my chances are only about 20%.”

Misha bursts out in tears, and without thinking, I pull her to her feet and embrace her. I feel her arms linking behind my back and pulling me close. I stroke her hair, while she continues to cry on my shoulder.

When the sobbing subsides much later, I venture a question. “I'm surprised you would come to me instead of going to Shizune...”

She chuckles. Her voice sounds raw, not at all like the bubbly voice I'm used to. “I love Shizune like I'd love my sister, but she's been living with her condition her entire life. This is something she cannot understand. She could never understand how it feels, knowing you will die.”

Now it's my turn to chuckle. “Wow. None of my doctors ever put it so bluntly, but you're probably right.” Knowing what Misha has gone through I can't understand how I could have ever raged against my fate. At least when I die, it will be a few seconds of pain and then all will be over.

She pulls back a bit to look into my eyes, searching, her arms still firmly clasped around my waist. For a moment I feel like I'm going to drown in those brown eyes of hers, then her lips suddenly rush forward and close on mine.

Her soft lips on mine fell just like in my dream. For a moment I am too surprised to react, then I pull her close once more and return her kiss...

We part after what feels like an eternity. Misha takes a step backwards. “I'm sorry. I shouldn't have...”

“Don't be.” I interrupt her. “Don't you dare to apologize for making me the happiest man on earth!”

“But...”

“I won't accept any 'buts' on that matter, and that's final.”

Misha blushes. “Okay... but...” she manages a grin, “I should be going now. Class has started half an hour ago.” She walks to the door and opens it. As she is about to leave, she turns to me one more time. “Thank you.” With that she closes the door and is gone.

I plop down on the bed and stare at the ceiling. Too many thoughts are running through my head to make any sense of them all. Only now I realize that my heart has not acted up once the whole time Misha was here. It can't be because I don't love her, because I am certain that I do. Maybe it's because the whole time I was thinking only about her and not myself. Everything we did just felt so natural, as if no heart defect had any right of interfering...

I chuckle again. To think that yesterday, I wanted to talk to Mr. Kanzaki about not training Kenji to be a mage. Not to take that risk. Well, yesterday there was only my own life to think about, but now the stakes have been raised. I will make sure that Kenji saves Misha's life, even if I have to beat him to a pulp with my own two hands to do it.

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Please look forward to chapter Six:
Snuff Out The Light
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griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
Sore wa himitsu desu.

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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Shades of gray » Thu Dec 16, 2010 12:26 am

*squinted look*

Mirage... why do I feel like you've hit Misha's In-game disability on the head?

Either way, excellent writing, intriguing plot, and of caurse the all over anticipation to see what happens next

*Squinted Look again, muttering* elbissop mmh ?esiugsid ni ved
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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by Devon » Thu Dec 16, 2010 1:25 am

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Re: Katawa Kijo

Post by SoulisS » Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:54 pm

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