Mirage's Myths

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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by Mirage_GSM » Tue Dec 07, 2010 2:22 pm

Thanks for the feedback you three.

By the way, that other project, I've been working on recently has progressed to the point that I'd like to pre-feed it to one or two people to smooth out the kinks. Focus being on stuff like pacing, mood etc.
The story is currently twelve pages and growing. It's not going to be as sentimental as the last one ;-)
So if you're interested, please drop me a PM.
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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by corona borealis » Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:47 am

A very nice read so far. But this last chapters title got me picturing misha singing the song with the same name from the little mermaid.

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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by Mirage_GSM » Thu Dec 16, 2010 5:52 am

She'd have to sing a very deep alto voice then, but that song would set a nice mood for the scene. Not all the chapter titles do...
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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by DaMan65 » Sat Apr 30, 2011 2:14 am

I'm pretty much a sucker for anything Rin centric. So needless to say I really enjoyed reading about an insight into how she thinks. I wish I had the skill to write about it myself but my own writing style isn't really fit for any type of KS fanfic. But as I was saying nice work I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by Torco » Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:13 am

Dude, I don't generally like fanfiction, and I don't generally like sentimental stories, and I don't generally like unrequited love... that being said, a tip of the hat. A well written piece there

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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by Mirage_GSM » Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:24 am

Thanks. I assume you're referring to "Catharsis".
I have to admit that story practically wrote itself, since it's almost word for word something I experienced myself - hence the double meaning of the title.
I don't usually like to write gloomy stories and my other stories should be more uplifting ;-)
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griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by emmjay » Mon May 13, 2013 6:55 am

My hat is off to you. There is no way on God's green Earth that I would attempt to get inside Rin's head the way you did. I love the parts where she's contemplating gifts for her mother. Nice job of showing how un-self-conscious she is about her disability. Reminds me of what Hisao says in the rooftop scene: "She gives off the impression of being entirely unaware that she's missing any limbs at all."
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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by NuclearStudent » Fri Nov 27, 2020 1:36 am

the initial quotation marks for "Catharsis" are actually commas
Feurox: it is extremely difficult to tell whether you're echoing some very interesting sentiments or if you're just attempting to be trite or funny

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Re: Mirage's Myths

Post by Mirage_GSM » Fri Nov 27, 2020 11:54 am

Actually they ARE quotation marks - just the German kind. Probably some weird from copying the text out of word.
"Were" now, anyway, because fixed. :-)
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

My collected KS-Fan Fictions: Mirage's Myths
griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
Sore wa himitsu desu.

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