Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by Smoku » Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:12 pm

yes! the ending is awesome. you know... this also sounds like: prostitution is good for your wallet :P

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by Esa94 » Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:43 am

THIS IS AWESOME.

Do you have any other ideas for stories? :3

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Post by kosherbacon » Mon Mar 29, 2010 11:47 am

Esa94 wrote:THIS IS AWESOME.

Do you have any other ideas for stories? :3
I've got one started that literally begins with Kenji and Hisao making out. :shock:


...so yeah.

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by SirMax » Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:46 pm

If you were intending to besmirch the morality of every character in Katawa Shoujo, you missed four.

Pretty well written though.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by kosherbacon » Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:10 am

SirMax wrote:If you were intending to besmirch the morality of every character in Katawa Shoujo, you missed four.
Hm, lets see here...

Hisao -Tranny prostitute.
Emi -Prostitute
Rin -Prostitute
Misha -Prostitute
Shizune -Prostitute
Hanako -Prostitute
Lilly -Madam
Muto -A John
Nomiya -A John
Akira -A... Jane?

So that leaves us with...

Mr. Nakai
Mrs. Nakai -Perfectly normal parents who acted predictably.
Iwanako -Hopefully less of a bitch because she felt bad about leaving Hisao
Kenji -No negative change...

...DAMMIT! You're right! :oops:

Edit: And Yuuko... Double dammit.

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by Csihar » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:09 am

Well done, guy. :) I got quite a few giggles out of this. Nice touch with the ending as well.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by SirMax » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:27 pm

kosherbacon wrote: Mr. Nakai
Mrs. Nakai -Perfectly normal parents who acted predictably.
Iwanako -Hopefully less of a bitch because she felt bad about leaving Hisao
Kenji -No negative change...
Actually, Mr and Mrs Nakai were both reacted pretty badly to Hisao's supposed homosexuality, Iwanako made him crossdress for her own amusement, and Kenji was a whorelord. I meant Yuuko, Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
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Post by kosherbacon » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:31 pm

SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
:lol: I lol'd.

For what it's worth...

Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by Esa94 » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:47 pm

kosherbacon wrote:
SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
:lol: I lol'd.

For what it's worth...

Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
You just invoked my trope-o-vision.

..And I trapped myself in TVTropes for hours :D

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Post by Extremist_Line » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:45 pm

kosherbacon wrote:
SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
:lol: I lol'd.

For what it's worth...

Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
I loled, hard. You can never catch a break with these can ya? Always got people coming in saying you missed something.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by SirMax » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:05 pm

kosherbacon wrote:
SirMax wrote: Hisao's cardiologist, the guy who tells Lily to go ahead and hang out with Hisao and her ending, and the guy Shizune and Hisao talk into giving free games for the ball throwing game.
:lol: I lol'd.

For what it's worth...

Hisao's cardiologist beats his kid, Yuuko sells crack at Shanghai, Lilly's classmate started the fire that burned down Hanako's house for the lulz, and the ball throwing guy once downloaded a copyrighted MP3 off the internet(GIVE HIM THE CHAIR!).
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You've now made every established character and person with a line in Katawa Shoujo less moral.
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Post by kosherbacon » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:13 pm

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Yes!

Oh yeah, and the classmate who put Iwanako's love letter in Hisao's book? She drowns kittens for fun.

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais, Trap

Post by Smoku » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:21 pm

kosherbacon wrote: Oh yeah, and the classmate who put Iwanako's love letter in Hisao's book? She drowns kittens for fun.
Noooooo! not the kittens! Let her drown little lawyers or politicians.

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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais,

Post by Petermeter » Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:55 am

*tosses the spade*
Sorry for digging out this old thread :) I just had to say I loved the Story and the use of Characters.
And you missed another one ;) It's the blind guy from Rins and Nomiyas art club (the one with the lack of bad luck).
Though you could say that you compensated that with Iwanakos math team.
Nice ending btw, probably best thing you could do to not clear everything up as it leaves space for imagination. Nice work, anyway.
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Re: Madame Lillian's Specialty Service(END)Iwanako, Nakais,

Post by Elcor » Fri May 04, 2012 10:56 pm

Not what I was expecting but a very interesting read.
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