So Kenji has finally succumbed to the Feminist Conspiracy (TM)...
Awesome story. You managed to make a likeable character out of Kenji and ship him with a girl in a believable way. I didn't think that would be possible.
Also you gave me ideas for at least two Kenji fics of my own. Too bad I probably won't have enough time to write them... Oh well, I'll just keep the ideas - who knows, hell might freeze over someday
Or I could find myself in a hospital for four months... Hey, it's been known to happen
Not much to criticize about your story either, except:
Hisao to Hanako wrote:-H-hey, wait!- I yell, but she's not stopping- See me tomorrow at the painted mural at 12! And take Lilly!
Hisao to Lilly wrote:Great. Let's meet by the mural near my dorm at 12.
I went back to my room preparing for today's lunch with Hanako and Lilly. I still had a few extra minutes. Enough to finish of a few minor homework stuff and clean the room a little bit. 13.00 was close so I decided to lock my dorm room and leave for the mural outside the dorm.
OMG, he stood them up for a whole hour
Also, I got a good laugh out of this:
Night came by right after the sun had set.
No shit, Sherlock...
Anyway, looking forward o your next work!