[Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

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[Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

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Shizune: Exactly As Planned

Hisao is a challenge, my first in a long time.

I look intently at the board, the careful pawn walls. Hisao is good at chess; I can tell. He deliberates.

Then, with a single decisive motion, he takes his queen's knight and places it to thwart my best move.

...Four turns away.

I smile.

With my ring and middle finger, I grasp the king's castle. I leave my index, pinky, and thumb outstreched, signing "I love you" to Hisao as I castle, though he cannot know that.

He looks at the board, and smiles.

I will checkmate him in five moves.

This is from Shizune's POV if you can't tell. And, yes, yes, SHE USES JSL NOT ASL YOU'RE DOIN IT WRONG. I know. Consider it JSL dubbed into ASL.
Last edited by Tsundere Lightning on Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: [Drabble, Shizune] Exactly As Planned

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It's a nice little narrative.
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One of the few fanworks that managed to make me smile. Short, sweet, and adorable: well played, good sir.
Donnes-moi le chocolat, Hisao! Gib mir die Schokolade, Hisao! Dame el chocolate, Hisao! Dammi il cioccolato, Hisao! Ge mig choklad, Hisao! Giv mig chokolade, Hisao! 私にチョコレートを与える, 久夫! Daj mi czekoladę, Hisao! Geef me de chocola, Hisao! (Thanks for the Dutch ver. Leotrak) Bigyan mo ako ng chocolate, Hisao! Geef mij de chocolade, Hisao! Дайте мне шоколад, Хисао! Dá-me o chocolate, Hisao!
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Re: [Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

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Misha: Gotcha!

Hiichan is extremely interesting, Shiichan tells me after school.
I grin. "What do you mean, huh Shiichan?"
She kitty smiles. ...he's encouraging me.
I grin more. I point at her - you - I hug myself - like - and I make an H then pump my fist (doki~doki), with a question-mark face - Hiichan?
I can't admit any affection for him, she says, still with the kitty smile, but really wide now.
"D'yu mean you can't? Or you won't?"
She lion-smiles, and folds her arms behind her back.
I laugh.
She knows I got her there.

Author's Notes:
Again with the JSL dubbed into ASL.
Also, OH SHIT IT'S SHIZUNE GET IN THE WHEELCHAIR! >:3


Edited: OH GOD ASTERIXES LEAVE ME ALONE
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Re: [Drabbles] Six Drabbles for Six Women

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Tsundere Lightning wrote:
Also, OH SHIT IT'S SHIZUNE GET IN THE WHEELCHAIR! >:3
Oh god thats hilarious. Still laughing at it. :lol:

Nice little blurbs too (I guess thats what you call them).
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Wow, I had forgotten that people were paying attention to this.

Have yourself the rest, on Fanfiction.net (Delta, please, please stop crying.)
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