Golden Room

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Re: Golden Room

Post by Yo-yo » Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:39 pm

Sorry for the necro-bump, but wow. I just had to say that I loved this story, and I know that whatever you have planned next won't disapoint. Keep up the amazing work!

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Re: Golden Room

Post by beatlebomb » Sat Jun 26, 2010 4:49 am

Just wanted to say, WOW, my lurking definitely paid off; definitely one of the best pieces on this forum.

Hope you'll finish the next segment soon... or in due time, anyways...

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hatori1181
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Re: Golden Room

Post by hatori1181 » Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:13 am

Excellent job. You've got me hooked, so I'll wait (mostly) patiently for the next part.
My original play-through schedule: Hanako, Lilly, Emi, Shizune, Rin.
After playing through the game a second time, the revised list goes like this: Lilly, Hanako, Shizune, Emi, Rin.

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Re: Golden Room

Post by The Gentleman » Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:34 am

Um. wow. That was..really good actually! The story flowed well and you represnted Hanako and Hisao perfectly! Take your time on part 2.

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Re: Golden Room

Post by Ozymil » Mon Jul 11, 2011 6:16 pm

The Gentleman wrote:Um. wow. That was..really good actually! The story flowed well and you represnted Hanako and Hisao perfectly! Take your time on part 2.
It's been over two years. I wouldn't expect part two any time soon, or at all for that matter.
Donnes-moi le chocolat, Hisao! Gib mir die Schokolade, Hisao! Dame el chocolate, Hisao! Dammi il cioccolato, Hisao! Ge mig choklad, Hisao! Giv mig chokolade, Hisao! 私にチョコレートを与える, 久夫! Daj mi czekoladę, Hisao! Geef me de chocola, Hisao! (Thanks for the Dutch ver. Leotrak) Bigyan mo ako ng chocolate, Hisao! Geef mij de chocolade, Hisao! Дайте мне шоколад, Хисао! Dá-me o chocolate, Hisao!

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Re: Golden Room

Post by bintoy » Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:27 am

vermithrx wrote:Don't count me out yet, guys. I'm still working on Part 2, it's just low priority for me right now and I kinda need to keep it that way for a while.
Ozymil wrote:It's been over two years. I wouldn't expect part two any time soon, or at all for that matter.
so far all the fanfics I read featuring Hanako's all great. This is no exception. This stuff's just amazing! But

We don't know what happened to vermithrx's life but it seems like priorities were totally shifted. It's been real long but I'm still hoping for a part 2. :(
heresy grows from idleness! -warhammer space marine

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Re: Golden Room

Post by kosherbacon » Mon Aug 22, 2011 3:03 pm

bintoy wrote:We don't know what happened to vermithrx's life but it seems like priorities were totally shifted. It's been real long but I'm still hoping for a part 2. :(
It happens to all of us, man. It doesn't take much IRL interference to totally derail a steady writefaggotry flow. I'm still trying to catch up with my reading here!

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Re: Golden Room

Post by PasterOfMuppets » Fri Sep 02, 2011 11:03 pm

With this, my good sir, you have killed two stones with one bird.
I like. Good Job :D
Good joke... Everybody laugh... Roll on snare drum... Curtains...

Hanako = Shizune = Lilly = Rin > Kenji > Placeholder > Emi

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Re: Golden Room

Post by vermithrx » Fri Aug 14, 2020 1:35 am

Sorry to leave everyone hanging for over a decade. Life's been hard and I've long since lost the ability to finish this story, let alone the will. Last time I did any work on it was back in 2012. I'm posting these mostly for my own closure, but also in the hope someone may get some enjoyment from them.

Here's the most complete draft as written:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v5I ... sp=sharing

Here's the larger outline I'd been working on:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KhW ... sp=sharing

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Re: Golden Room

Post by Hacksorus » Sat Aug 15, 2020 1:41 am

Thanks for posting what you had, I hope it gave you the closure you were looking for. I just read it for the first time, I enjoyed it. It's interesting how you hit such similar beats to the "Hisao showing his scar to Hanako" scene that ended up being in the final release.

I gotta say though, those notes are a rollercoaster and a half. Love triangle featuring lesbians? Suicide?? Rin/Kenji??????? That was one hell of a story you had planned back in the day.

Whatever your next plans are out there in the world, I wish you the best of luck!
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Re: Golden Room

Post by Oddball » Mon Aug 17, 2020 3:27 pm

There were certainly some wild ideas there.

It's a shame we'll never get to see them written out, but I can understand how a project can grow beyond your ability to do it justice. That's without even getting into how time can change your views on things.
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