Mutty99 Short Comps Thread

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Mutty99 Short Comps Thread

Post by Mutty99 » Thu Jul 16, 2020 4:05 am

Welcome to my short comp thread.
I usually write some really short drafts when i have some free time, so i'll publish them here.
Here you can find their links.


Judgement
Final Act
Regret
Sorrow
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Short Comp #1 - Judgement

Post by Mutty99 » Thu Jul 16, 2020 4:07 am

Void.
Despair.
Useless. You're useless, broken and insignificant.

Scream as much as you want. Noone will hear you.
Noone will care.
Nothing will change.

You were doomed from the very start of your existence.
You'll never see the daylight.
You'll never find peace.
Always a prisoner, a slave, a vegetal.

Believe and stay determined as much as you want, revolting piece of trash.
Empty your life will always remain,
Grey, unoriginal, without making an impact or even a stain.
On the edge of tomorrow you'll gaze, devoid of hope,
Neglecting yourself and crawling in the darkness. The pain will never
End, your suffering will last for eternity.

Fall.

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Short Comp #2 - Final Act

Post by Mutty99 » Thu Jul 16, 2020 4:11 am

I seek for my enemy,
As he rises from its slumber.
Sword in hand, protecting my comrades,
I shall vanquish you from the universe!

Shall the divine light surround my body
and give me the strength to finish this war.
Gazing towards the horizon I rise,
with her smile in my mind, wings full speed,
as I unleash my full power!

Purify the darkness! Restore balance!
BURST YOUR ESSENCE AND STRIKE!

てんし おろら!!!!!
ANGEL AURORA!!!!!

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Short Comp #3 - Regret

Post by Mutty99 » Thu Jul 16, 2020 4:16 am

Words can bring joy to the hearts and minds of people, as much as they can break them.
Because of that, miscommunication is hatred's favourite nourishment.

You thought he was evil, wicked and selfish.
You abandoned him, called him names.
The worst part is that you didn't even try to make an effort and reach his true emotions.

So wrong, SO FREAKING WRONG YOU LITTLE BRAT ARE YOU?!
YOU FAILED HIM!
THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!

Watch now as the one you loved suffers, mind-melted, and lets his dark side go berserk, devouring and destroying everything.
He lost himself completely.
Despair.
So. Much. Pain.

Regret.
Darkness.

Void.

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Re: Mutty99 Short Topics Thread

Post by Oddball » Thu Jul 16, 2020 8:28 am

Those really are short.

It's not really my thing, but it's nice to have another another writer around these parts.
Not Dead Yet

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Short Comp #4 - Sorrow

Post by Mutty99 » Sun Jul 19, 2020 6:27 am

You're right, such feeling is peculiar.
My only regret is that I could've realized much sooner what kind of person you truly were.
Casting apart my hobbies, my friendships and my family, I devoted myself to you.
And what did you do?

WHAT DID YOU DO, YOU HEARTLESS PIECE OF SHIT?!

Talked behind my back.
Cheated on me multiple times with multiple guys.
Called me names, and much more.
Everything while I was away, working my ass off to get stronger.
Everything to be able to protect you. But now. BUT NOW!

You don't deserve anything like that! You're a horrible person, and you ruined my life!
I was close to commit suicide because of you!

Now I want you to know what I felt. I'll make sure to not stop until you're devoured by your own agony!
I'll make you regret much more than just your "little" betrayal, like you say.

I'll tell everyone about what happened.
They will know, and they're all going to scream in your face the exact same thing:

I HATE YOU!

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