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Re: Chris' Saki One Shots

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2020 11:13 am
by Oddball
The first two stories you did had a nice strong emotional feel to them (although the quoting you used for one line of A Conversation on the Roof does throw one out of the story just a touch.)

Fluke has a really nice idea, but I feel it's over to short to really make a good impact. I think you could have explored the idea better in a longer work.