Home (Complete)

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Home (Complete)

Post by Lap » Mon Aug 20, 2018 8:26 pm

So, I finally finished Home, my long work that An Unexpected Visitor was excerpted from.

It clocks in at close to 60,000 words, so...fair warning. :D

It's on Ao3: https://archiveofourown.org/works/15614 ... s/36254490


EDIT: Added an illustration.
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It's a story about Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing a room with their friend Lilly. Life Happens...
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Current KS Stories:
Akira's Surprise: Akira pays a surprise visit to Lilly, Hanako and Hisao on Christmas eve. S9 Entry.
Arrival : Hanako's first days at Yamaku
Home: Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing an apartment with their friend Lilly (on Ao3).

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Re: Home (Complete)

Post by Imperial_Sheep » Tue Aug 21, 2018 2:01 am

That was..... an adventure. :D

One small issue, you mentioned Shizune being able to track the two of them from the noise they were making doesn't fully make sense in my mind, since she is deaf. Might just have been my brain failing to understand the sentence.

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Re: Home (Complete)

Post by Lap » Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:06 am

Well...I hope it was at least an enjoyable adventure!

As for Lilly's comment, she was just making a joke at her cousin's expense—saying that they were so loud that a deaf person could have heard them.
Current KS Stories:
Akira's Surprise: Akira pays a surprise visit to Lilly, Hanako and Hisao on Christmas eve. S9 Entry.
Arrival : Hanako's first days at Yamaku
Home: Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing an apartment with their friend Lilly (on Ao3).

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Re: Home (Complete)

Post by Imperial_Sheep » Tue Aug 21, 2018 9:16 pm

Lap wrote:
Tue Aug 21, 2018 6:06 am
Well...I hope it was at least an enjoyable adventure!
It was. I loved reading the story.

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Re: Home (Complete)

Post by NoticeMeOppai » Tue Nov 20, 2018 1:26 pm

I really enjoyed this, one of very few poly fics that actually comes across as being a believable situation. I particularly enjoyed the little asides as you fade to black a few times there.

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Re: Home (Complete)

Post by Lap » Wed Nov 21, 2018 11:27 pm

NoticeMeOppai wrote:
Tue Nov 20, 2018 1:26 pm
I really enjoyed this, one of very few poly fics that actually comes across as being a believable situation. I particularly enjoyed the little asides as you fade to black a few times there.
Thanks! :D Some vague semblance of reality in a poly relationship was one of my main objectives, so I'm glad to know it worked for you.
Current KS Stories:
Akira's Surprise: Akira pays a surprise visit to Lilly, Hanako and Hisao on Christmas eve. S9 Entry.
Arrival : Hanako's first days at Yamaku
Home: Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing an apartment with their friend Lilly (on Ao3).

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