Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

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Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

Post by Mirage_GSM » Tue Sep 10, 2019 3:25 am

Lilly's never been the sort to dive into work at all...
...she DOES have a history of inoring and actively avoiding potential conflicts in her relationship - to the point of avoiding Hisao as well.
Hisao at this point should be aware enough to not do anything to startle Hanako.
I imagine being about to break up with your girlfriend would make you quite nervous and jumpy.
Hence the punchline is also the raison d'être for this situation. It may not be a bug, but a feature.
The punchline is the only thing I don't really like about this story. It does not seem to fit the mood.
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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