NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/12/15 - Now with Index]

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/11/07]

Post by NoticeMeOppai » Sat Nov 10, 2018 3:30 am

Glad you all enjoyed it, thanks for the feedback!
Hanako Fancopter wrote:
Thu Nov 08, 2018 1:37 am
I like Hanako, and double like lewd Hanako. And triple like yuri Hanako >.>
Speaking of yuri Hanako, that last one was actually partly inspired by your unexpectedly sweet Hanako x Misha fix.
Hanako Fancopter wrote:
Thu Nov 08, 2018 1:37 am
One comment I have is that I think some of your sentences tend to run on a bit. But I think your writing is good overall!
Hmm, yeah I see what you mean. It's something I've struggled with, striking a balance between run ons and short choppy phrases. Thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely take it on board.
Mirage_GSM wrote:
Thu Nov 08, 2018 9:43 am
Funny thing we were just discussing one of Kosher's stories in the book club.
Your writing reminds me of his.
I will absolutely take that as a compliment! I'll pop in and have a look at which one is in the book club.
brythain wrote:
Thu Nov 08, 2018 10:58 am
Started vanilla, ended strawberry cotton candy. :D
Hehe, you know it!

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/11/16]

Post by NoticeMeOppai » Fri Nov 16, 2018 6:54 pm

And now for something completely different! I wrote this whilst I was struggling to sleep the other night. Poetry isn't something I've really done too much of before but thought I'd try my hand at it. I'm not going to offend the purists by trying to claim this is a haiku, but it's certainly haiku inspired. Hopefully it makes enough sense without explaining too much about it but I'd appreciate any feedback.

Worry Tree


I have a secret
A place I can sit alone
And there I worry

The old worry tree
My secret spot no longer
I don't mind so much

He joins me there now
Not always, only sometimes
I guess it's quite nice

My words come out wrong
It's easier when painting
To say how I feel

Sometimes I worry
That no-one understands me
Still, one day, He might

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/11/16]

Post by Hanako Fancopter » Fri Nov 16, 2018 7:13 pm

Very good! In my opinion at least. I am crap at poetry so it's cool to see people make good ones.

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/11/16]

Post by Lap » Sat Nov 17, 2018 8:06 am

Sweet. The epigrammatic nature of haikus seems particularly well suited to Rin's thought processes.
Current KS Stories:
Avenues of Communication Shizune suffers an accident. (WIP)
Akira's Surprise: Akira pays a surprise visit to Lilly, Hanako and Hisao on Christmas eve. S9 Entry.
Arrival : Hanako's first days at Yamaku. (WIP)
Home: Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing an apartment with their friend Lilly (on Ao3).

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/11/16]

Post by NoticeMeOppai » Sun Dec 16, 2018 6:49 pm

Glad you guys liked the poetry, here's some more smut. Apologies for any weird formatting, just moved house so posting from mobile.

Ecouteurism (NSFW)

"I think I'm going to have to call it a night. " Hanako's cup clinks lightly against the saucer as she pushes it away from her.

"Yeah, same here" Hisao agrees, getting to his feet, "Thanks as always for the tea Lilly!"

I incline my head in a slight bow and a smile flickers at the edges of my mouth. Even now, my heart flutters a little when he says my name. "You are quite welcome Hisao, you know I always enjoy the time I spend with you and Hanako."

The two of them make quite the cute couple I have to admit. Even though they have been dating for a little while now, they still make time to spend with me.

"Shall I escort you to your door my lady?" Hisao affects a chivalrous tone and Hanako giggles.

"Why thank you kind sir."

All three of us are fully aware he has no intention of just leaving after walking her to the door. Whether the other two realise I know that though, I am not sure. I feel Hanako might be a little less blatant about it if she was, but she may just be too besotted to think about it.

I close and lock the door as they amble down the hall and quickly clear the tea set away. I resolve to wash them up in the morning as I have more pressing concerns right now.

I push the cushion I have been sitting on up against the wall and drag the other two cushions over near it. Sitting down carefully, I am mindful not to bump into the wall too hard. Whilst the dorm walls may not be traditional paper walls, the cheap plasterboard may as well be paper for all the noise proofing it provides.

Starting with Hisao's cushion I lift each of them to my face in turn. There's not much of a scent from Hisao's as he tends to wear his school uniform so his legs are covered. I still try it every time he leaves regardless. Hanako's tends to have more of a scent to it, partly due to the thin material of her nightgown and partly due to her having come to tea with me for that much longer. Some low giggling through the wall tells me they will be getting started shortly.

I put the cushions down and remove my bra from under my pyjama top. I have considered not wearing one when they come round but decided to err on the side of caution. Keeping it on helps to hide my arousal, as given how hard my nipples are when I lightly brush past them, they would be quite visible through the thin material of my top. Hanako might also get a bit upset with me being in such a state of undress around her boyfriend. I get the feeling even the amount of leg I have on show is a bit much for her. Thankfully she is too polite to say anything and quite frankly, the strangled sound Hisao made as he walked in earlier was well worth it.

The giggling has decreased in frequency and is now interspersed with long periods of silence where I strain to make out any sounds through the wall. My efforts are soon rewarded as my sensitive hearing picks up a light gasp and I smile to myself. One hand has been stretched across my body, absently toying with my nipple as I listen. I slip the other down past my waistband into my already damp panties, lightly toying with my slit.

I can hear heavy breathing from both of them now and the gasps are getting more frequent as the two lovers find their rhythm. I find my own around the same time, drawing small circles around my clit before plunging my long slender fingers deep inside. My imagination conjures up a myriad of scenarios where I could be in the other room with them, with Hisao driving deep inside me as I bury my own face between Hanako's legs. My tongue flicks out, dancing across my lips before I pull it back in and along the floor of my mouth. The soft slightly lumpy texture under my tongue helps with the immersion as I dream of tasting Hanako's most intimate place.

My fingers plunge in and out of me faster now and I find my panties getting in the way of my fantasies. The scent of my own arousal increases as I pull them free, driving me onto new heights. I feel a familiar warmth building inside me and increase my rhythm as my breathing becomes more ragged by the second. In the next room, I can hear moans and groans from both Hisao and Hanako as they lose themselves in each other and staying quiet becomes less of a priority for them.

The first wave of my orgasm crashes over me a little sooner than I was expecting and I bite my lip trying to stifle an involuntary moan. The adorable little yelps and squeals Hanako is making along with Hisao's low grunts lets me know I have avoided detection. Its not high on my list of priorities right now even if I had been detected as I focus on riding the next wave of ecstasy.

Eventually I can't take any more and my arms drop to my sides, spent. At some point I must have slid down the wall as I'm now lying flat on the floor panting gently. I wipe the light sheen of perspiration from my forehead and feel around to retrieve my underwear so I can put everything back in it's proper place. I just about manage this while staying horizontal and opt to put off dragging myself upright for a little longer as I bask in the afterglow. I really hope I didn't give myself away with that groan earlier, that would be very embarrassing. At the same time, part of me entertains the idea of them hearing and inviting me to join next time. Not really something I think Hanako would go for sadly, but still, a girl can dream.

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/12/15 - Now with Index]

Post by Lap » Sun Dec 16, 2018 9:49 pm

TIL a new word: Ecouteurism.

And also had a fun read. Thanks!
Current KS Stories:
Avenues of Communication Shizune suffers an accident. (WIP)
Akira's Surprise: Akira pays a surprise visit to Lilly, Hanako and Hisao on Christmas eve. S9 Entry.
Arrival : Hanako's first days at Yamaku. (WIP)
Home: Hanako & Hisao at University, sharing an apartment with their friend Lilly (on Ao3).

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/12/15 - Now with Index]

Post by NoticeMeOppai » Mon Dec 17, 2018 3:04 am

Yeah it was a new word for me too, was going to go with Audio Voyeurism but a quick Google later found there was an actual term for it. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Re: NmO does Shorts [Updated 2018/12/15 - Now with Index]

Post by Hanako Fancopter » Mon Dec 17, 2018 5:46 am

>smut

>hanako in the first sentence

aww yiss

Keep trying Lilly. It's more possible than you realize!

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