Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 8/8/2018)

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Re: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 8/8/2018)

Post by Craftyatom » Mon Aug 13, 2018 12:24 pm

Not exactly the direction I was expecting this chapter to go, but certainly one I had considered. I especially liked the ending, where neither Yumi nor Rin are happy, but for opposite reasons. This chapter fit the flow of the story really well, in my opinion, and had some important elements that distinguished it from the route in the VN.

Excellent work, as per usual!
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Re: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 8/8/2018)

Post by QuietlySomething » Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:12 pm

Craftyatom wrote:
Mon Aug 13, 2018 12:24 pm
Not exactly the direction I was expecting this chapter to go, but certainly one I had considered. I especially liked the ending, where neither Yumi nor Rin are happy, but for opposite reasons. This chapter fit the flow of the story really well, in my opinion, and had some important elements that distinguished it from the route in the VN.

Excellent work, as per usual!
Thanks Crafty. This one was challenging to write; I’m trying to be careful to make sure that things feel distinct from the events in the VN. Glad you enjoyed.

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Re: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 8/8/2018)

Post by FinallyCaved » Fri Mar 15, 2019 12:43 am

Man, I hope this keeps going.

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