Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)

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Christov_Jones77
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Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)

Post by Christov_Jones77 » Mon Aug 20, 2018 10:19 pm

Ooo now that should be good. I also like how the Nurse ferls like an actual medical professional that works well with high school students and not just window dressing or one liners. Have a good one and I'll keep any eye out for updates. :D
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Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)

Post by Hesmiyu » Fri Sep 14, 2018 10:33 am

Christov_Jones77 wrote:
Mon Aug 20, 2018 10:19 pm
Ooo now that should be good. I also the Nurse stands out out as being an actual medical professional that works well with high school students and not just window dressing or one liners. Have a good one and I'll keep any eye out for updates. :D
Long wait for a response cough. It is amazing what stuff you can find on the Internet whether on purpose or by accident (on accident? This is why I have a proof reader). With Nurse, I look up the medical details and then try have him say it in layman's terms while adding humour to his dialogue when needed.

Also, I've added a cast photo (not complete) to the first post :) .
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