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SWEvikingSWE
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by SWEvikingSWE » Wed Aug 06, 2014 1:57 pm
My first hand drawn picture (that actually looks good).
Lilly is my most favorable Katawan Shoujo girl and i love her route. Emi is my second favorite and then Hanako.
Without further do here is the pic, hope you like it

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CoffeeDrive
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by CoffeeDrive » Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:57 pm
Nice picture, although as you probably noticed, proportions a little off.
(Also, its drawn, not drawed.)
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SWEvikingSWE
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by SWEvikingSWE » Wed Aug 06, 2014 6:19 pm
Nice picture, although as you probably noticed, proportions a little off.
(Also, its drawn, not drawed.)
thanks for the response

Yes i know the proportions is a bit off but hey, i just sketched and got this as result.

Thanks for the headline fix by the way, Didn't notice it before.
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by Munchenhausen » Wed Aug 06, 2014 6:20 pm
I can tell a lot of work went into this!
you've got the shading, clothing wrinkles, fingers, knuckles, eyelashes... Very well done!
The only let down is the proportioning, but that is quite tricky
Nice drawing, mate!
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by KeiichiO » Wed Aug 06, 2014 6:32 pm
CoffeeDrive wrote:Nice picture, although as you probably noticed, proportions a little off.
A little off? She's got baby arms, and a giant head.
Pardon my bluntness, but I think you should work on your human proportions, because they're
way off.
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by Oddball » Wed Aug 06, 2014 7:49 pm
I thought that was just the style the guy was using. Some people just draw really huge heads.
The arms actually bother me more than the head size does. They just look so tiny.
Also, i can't tell if she's wearing pants or not.
Still, it's nothing to sneeze at.
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by AaronIsCrunchy » Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:36 am
Oddball wrote:I thought that was just the style the guy was using. Some people just draw really huge heads.
The arms actually bother me more than the head size does. They just look so tiny.
Also, i can't tell if she's wearing pants or not.
Still, it's nothing to sneeze at.
I agree with this, actually, gives it a slightly cartoony quality. The hair in particular is very nicely done. Granted, the arms are too small for the body but not by a huge amount.
Neat work anyway, keep at it

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by SWEvikingSWE » Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:06 pm
I can tell a lot of work went into this!
you've got the shading, clothing wrinkles, fingers, knuckles, eyelashes... Very well done!
The only let down is the proportioning, but that is quite tricky
Nice drawing, mate!
Thanks

this was such a heartwarming reply ^^ it made me very glad.
Hehe indeed It's tricky, didn't notice the proportions after I took and looked at the picture.
A little off? She's got baby arms, and a giant head.
Pardon my bluntness, but I think you should work on your human proportions, because they're way off.
Guess it's my kind of style, because when I draw the proportions It didn't feel wrong at all.
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SWEvikingSWE
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by SWEvikingSWE » Thu Aug 14, 2014 9:16 am
A portrait of Hanako by me, SWEvikingSWE. I'm Really happy about the outcome, Though the neck Is quite long and small, but I don't mind it. Also noticed the eye is a bit out of proportion, but I think its cute.
I HIGHLY recommend zooming out for the best view
*EDIT*
Added the scars lol xD

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by SpunkySix » Thu Aug 14, 2014 10:43 am
Not bad. I like the eye especially, but... where are her scars tho?
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by SWEvikingSWE » Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:42 am
SpunkySix wrote:Not bad. I like the eye especially, but... where are her scars tho?
Damm I just noticed that I've forgotten the scars! :O
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by Zykes » Thu Aug 14, 2014 11:53 am
That was fast on the update!
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by SpunkySix » Thu Aug 14, 2014 12:10 pm
Zykes wrote:That was fast on the update!
It was! Much better now.
It's funny how often people forget her scars. I think it speaks to how good of a character she is that people care so little about them sometimes.
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by SWEvikingSWE » Thu Aug 14, 2014 1:09 pm
Zykes wrote:That was fast on the update!
You can say I'm a "Speed-Drawer", and I got LOTS of free time. After i discovered the mistake, I just draw of my mind and ended up with a pleasing result. ^^
SpunkySix wrote:Zykes wrote:That was fast on the update!
It was! Much better now.
It's funny how often people forget her scars. I think it speaks to how good of a character she is that people care so little about them sometimes.
Indeed, she Is a very good character and I totally forgot the scars. Now when i think about it, i must have fought I've already drawn the scars or something among those lines.