Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Fri Sep 06, 2013 12:12 pm
Inspired by the fanfic Sisterhood, http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6750, specifically chapter 8.
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Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 8:15 am
Hisao looks rather feminine today. Also, the scar tissue extends down to Hanako's hand, not terminating at her forearm. Otherwise, good job!
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 11:29 am
Neat. 
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:30 pm
Good points, i will keep that in mind. Any tips how i could make Hisao look less "feminine"?Sea wrote:Hisao looks rather feminine today. Also, the scar tissue extends down to Hanako's hand, not terminating at her forearm. Otherwise, good job!
Thanks!Guest Poster wrote:Neat.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:35 pm
For one, I'd trim the hair a bit. It's a tad too long. I'd also suggest shrinking the eyes slightly and making the mouth and noise longer, as well as making the head a bit less round.Any tips how i could make Hisao look less "feminine"?
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2013 4:46 pm
...WIP Hisao's face:
Currently having difficulties in placing the eyes right without making him look angry.
Currently having difficulties in placing the eyes right without making him look angry.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Fri Sep 13, 2013 7:05 am
It's better, but the hair was one of the main things for me.NekoNutchi wrote:...WIP Hisao's face:
Currently having difficulties in placing the eyes right without making him look angry.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2013 1:00 pm
Off the top of my head, you might want to pronounce bone structure further if you want a more masculine head.
Also, given anime's love of lineplay, you might want to use bolder, straighter lines for a masculine face, too.
Also, given anime's love of lineplay, you might want to use bolder, straighter lines for a masculine face, too.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2013 4:27 pm
Update:
And here's the entire image, but here the change appears more subtle, if at all.
And here's the entire image, but here the change appears more subtle, if at all.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2013 11:25 pm
Expand the mouth, it's way out of proportionNekoNutchi wrote:Update:
And here's the entire image, but here the change appears more subtle, if at all.
http://th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2 ... 6kvzhl.jpg
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 9:21 am
Not so much advice, just wanted to say that the concept for this is super cute.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2014 12:32 pm
It's adorable. I haven't read the fanfiction btw.
Re: Hanako & Hisao at the arcade
Posted: Thu Dec 11, 2014 7:11 am
At first I thought Hanako looked a little glassy-eyed, but then I took a second look and noticed the tilt of her eyes. That's not glassy-eyed, that's her focusing-intently-on-the-game look. Nice work.