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TheNicofabi's Fanart

Post by TheNicofabi » Sun Aug 04, 2013 4:41 am

Heyho... i am TheNicofabi and just present this since the story realy made me to do it... i just finished Katawa Shoujo on Hanako yesterday... so i maybe still dont know that much about it... and ofcours i may get some feed back... and if you guys wanna see more of me check out my DeviantArt http://thenicofabi.deviantart.com/

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Post by Reyhan » Sun Aug 04, 2013 12:31 pm

It's not that bad. Did you use reference? Is that an A4? It looks huge.
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Post by TheNicofabi » Sun Aug 04, 2013 12:43 pm

Reyhan wrote:Did you use reference?
Jeah i had one but i changed it a little.
Reyhan wrote:Is that an A4? It looks huge.
Yes it is made on an A4.
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Post by Reyhan » Sun Aug 04, 2013 1:12 pm

Just my two cents:
Did you use an HB? You should use more than one pencil if you want that contrast. Her eye also looks a little weird, just a little. It's missing that highlight. Maybe you purposefully left it out, but i don't think it can do without it.Pupil should be a little bigger too you know, narrow pupils are either stunned or evil and her eyelashes should definitely be a little thicker. I don't want to be too hard on you but, your shading needs a little work too & the line work isn't exactly on point, but with practice you will be able to make those graceful uninterrupted strokes like a pro. Not that i am one myself :)
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Post by TheNicofabi » Sun Aug 04, 2013 1:28 pm

Reyhan wrote:Just my two cents:I don't want to be too hard on you but
Dont worry ^^ thats the reason why i posted it here, to get feedback and so on, and yes i only did it with an HB but it was hard for me to draw still with the thoughts of her story still having wet eyes... god i am an emiotional boy... but jeah i still have to learn the detailed eyes...
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Post by Sea » Sun Aug 04, 2013 3:52 pm

Hmmmm, not bad, not bad at all.
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Re: TheNicofabi's Fanart

Post by Reyhan » Sun Aug 04, 2013 4:02 pm

Aah yes, "The feels" I know what you mean. I'm already doing a couple myself albeit i don't have my own topic yet no pressure
You should do some more. When you do, i'll probably be here.
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Post by TheNicofabi » Sun Aug 04, 2013 4:08 pm

Sea wrote:Hmmmm, not bad, not bad at all.
I tryed my best ;D
Reyhan wrote:You should do some more.
Dont worry there should come more... it just needs the right time, since when i would force myself it would end up in a disaster...
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Post by Topham » Mon Aug 05, 2013 4:09 am

Consider scribbling. Sometimes, I get motivation from a particularly interesting pen stroke, and I'll work off of that odd idea.
But then again, I'm a digital artist that can use ctrl+z, so there's that.
I forgot to say, it looks very good! I would love to see more :D
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Re: TheNicofabi's Fanart

Post by TheNicofabi » Wed Aug 07, 2013 1:37 pm

Topham wrote:I forgot to say, it looks very good! I would love to see more :D
Thank you ^^ and like i said it needs a bit of time until my next comes i guess ;D
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