Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 21-11-2016)

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Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 21-11-2016)

Post by Req » Fri Jul 19, 2013 5:14 am

So a couple weeks ago I got a tablet.
This is how I've been spending some of my time.
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Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated since I know there's lots of room for improvement.
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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Sea » Fri Jul 19, 2013 9:53 am

Well I'm impressed.
They all look awesome, especially the Hanako with Katana, except where is her mouth? And what are those lines on her face? Otherwise, great job
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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by wazuzu » Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:54 am

There is something in your pictures, and you should definitely go on. They are pretty bad, honestly, but more like lack-of-practice-bad. Draw more and everything will be great. Good luck.
To be more precise, you should work on anatomy and basic geometry a bit. I'd suggest you spend as much time you spent on those 3 pictures, to draw one, but do it really good.

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Req » Fri Jul 19, 2013 1:53 pm

thanks for your feedback. I'll work on those things, as you suggested. Hopefully by drawing on a daily basis I'll be able to show something actually impressive in the future.

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Guestimate » Fri Jul 19, 2013 6:00 pm

wazuzu wrote:They are pretty bad, honestly, but more like lack-of-practice-bad
*snort* Better than anything I could do...

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Overwatch_Elite » Fri Jul 19, 2013 6:54 pm

Akira looks like she's about to jam that toothbrush right into Lilly's nose :o
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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Req » Fri Jul 19, 2013 7:05 pm

since practice is what I need, practice is what I did.

...it's a motorcycle joke.
EDIT: and now in full color.
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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Sea » Sat Jul 20, 2013 10:05 pm

Miki has purple hair?
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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Req » Sat Jul 20, 2013 10:17 pm

not THAT purple, nor is Suzu's hair the right color, but yes.

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Guestimate » Sun Jul 21, 2013 1:03 am

... I don't get it. But I like Suzu's "Why must you do this to me?" face.

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Req » Sun Jul 21, 2013 1:35 am

Suzuki > motorcycle > revving gesture.

glad I got the facial expression right at least.

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Guestimate » Sun Jul 21, 2013 1:10 pm

... OH! *facepalm*

Heh, guess I've just trained myself out of the "Susuki *snerk*" reaction.

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Req » Sat Jul 27, 2013 11:48 am

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Overwatch_Elite » Sat Jul 27, 2013 11:59 am

I assume that without a spoon Misha is going to just go face first into her food and gobble it down

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Re: Reqreation: First steps

Post by Sea » Sat Jul 27, 2013 11:49 pm

Overwatch_Elite wrote:I assume that without a spoon Misha is going to just go face first into her food and gobble it down

I am perfectly ok with this Image
but. . . where is her tongue? Is it that weird dip in her mouth? LINES MAN! LINES!
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