Poor attempt at drawing and idea

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Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by udscbt » Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:03 am

I had an idea for a drawing for a while now, but never done it out of fear of it coming out terrible. Today I finally tried to draw it and... ok, it's not really good, but it's not bad either (I think).
Here it is:
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Now I have to refine it and colour it, and I think I will do it (probably... maybe... there's a tiny chance), but I mostly posted this to know if you like the concept (and/or have any suggestion).
Since I am not very good at drawing (I think this is the best thing I've ever drawn), if anyone wants to "steal" this idea and make it better, I heartly approve :)

PS: now that I think about it, maybe I should have added drills to her airstyle :P

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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by OtakuNinja » Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:08 am

Nah, make her fast instead. Much easier to draw. :P

I really like your idea. The last picture I saw when someone attempted to forge all girls together was... scary. :shock: This was really great! :)
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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by udscbt » Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:39 pm

I'm surprised by myself, but I actually took the time to finish it (not that it took much).
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OtakuNinja wrote:Nah, make her fast instead. Much easier to draw. :P

I really like your idea. The last picture I saw when someone attempted to forge all girls together was... scary. :shock: This was really great! :)
Thank you very much! :)
Actually, I was really afraid of making a mess when I started drawing all the girls in one character, but it turned out quite well. But I think it worked mostly because it's a chibi, a "grown-up" version drawn by me would definitely have looked "scary".

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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by Mahorfeus » Thu Jan 10, 2013 11:48 pm

How does she feel if she doesn't have hands?

On the serious side, it does look like a really fun idea. As for the artwork itself, I don't think you're giving yourself enough credit. Disclaimer: I use my own artistic ability (or lack thereof) as my benchmark for critique.
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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by Dream » Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:40 am

Sorry to be a party-pooper, but i find the drawing rather disturbing. It's not because of the technique or anything you can help, but the subject matter is just... Kimochi Warui.
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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by Silentcook » Fri Jan 11, 2013 4:11 pm

Dream wrote:Kimochi Warui.
Try again using words everyone can understand without having to delve into a foreign dictionary.
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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by LordDarknus » Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:24 am

Dream wrote:Sorry to be a party-pooper, but i find the drawing rather disturbing. It's not because of the technique or anything you can help, but the subject matter is just... Kimochi Warui.
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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by Oddball » Sat Jan 12, 2013 5:06 pm

Silentcook wrote:
Dream wrote:Kimochi Warui.
Try again using words everyone can understand without having to delve into a foreign dictionary.
So, having looked it up, it's apparently a phrase that doesn't even directly translate. It could mean anything from, "this is disgusting," to "I feel sick," to "this feeling sucks."

So good job using a phrase where nobody can possibly know exactly what you intended. :evil:
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Re: Poor attempt at drawing and idea

Post by Dream » Sat Jan 12, 2013 11:21 pm

Man, i didn't imagine an off-hand reference to EoE would cause so much backlash. But you are right, i shouldn't have used a phrase that no one would have understood outside most eva fans. I apologize. And yeah, the phrase is extremely vague and not easy to translate.
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