First time Katawa Shoujo Drawing.

[Mike007899]

Original Pic i used for Hanako.


My drawing of Hanako.


Colored Hanako with GNU Image Manipulation Program (GIMP also found here: http://www.gimp.org). (idk why this Hanako looks wider then the other...)


Also, I know i cant color that good and atm I am very broke to afford colored pencils. (lame excuse)

Please critique my work. all feedback is welcome and sorry if it looks a bit sloppy, but I have yet to sleep and I did this at about 3:15AM EST to 6:30AM EST. Hope you like it!

[Aspirin]

I like it!
Maybe some shades and some lighting effects could make your drawing more three-dimensional, but I know it's difficult without using watercolors (as I do sometime) or photo editors.

[bronko]

I think it's a bit too dark, especially the skin. Apart from that it's fine

[Mike007899]

I like it!
Maybe some shades and some lighting effects could make your drawing more three-dimensional, but I know it's difficult without using watercolors (as I do sometime) or photo editors.

Thanks

I think it's a bit too dark, especially the skin. Apart from that it's fine

and Thanks