Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

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Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Sat Feb 11, 2012 1:06 am

i should have killed myself long ago
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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by CNB » Sat Feb 11, 2012 1:17 am

The collar could use a little work but I like overall feel, nice loose lines.

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:28 am

i should have killed myself long ago
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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:59 am

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by charmisokay » Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:12 am

:)
good work, I like it.
After playing Lilly's route I started eating pizza with a knife and a fork ^^ I'm such a gentleman.

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Sat Feb 11, 2012 6:13 am

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by CNB » Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:22 am

You might find her eyes look better/more like official art if you remove the highlight.

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:34 pm

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by CNB » Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:57 am

As I mentioned before, I like the loose lines; they look very spontaneous, and give a nice sense of volume to her torso even without shading.

Her face looks a bit flat in the colored version (mostly because the shadows cast by her bangs and chin don't look like they're falling on curved surfaces), and her features are a bit misaligned -- which I think you must have noticed, since you fooled around with the eyes and mouth a couple times while moving from the initial line sketch to the final colored version.

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Mon Feb 13, 2012 3:14 am

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:31 pm

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by GIRakaCHEEZER » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:37 pm

Captain Hobo wrote:This game has broken me.
I don't know how it happened but Lilly has just consumed me.
I'll have dreams of me leading her around and talking to her.
Holding her hand.
Embracing her.

I have never felt this way about a fictional character before and don't think I will ever be the same person I was before I played this game.
I'm a 21 year old Australian bloke who has fallen for a collection of ideas and pixels. Who before this had his heart caged off to avoid getting hurt again and had no motivation to do something in life.
As perplexed as these feelings make me, as much as it hurts to wake up from those dreams feeling empty and broken...

It's good. Because I can now fix myself the way I want, so I can find my Lilly in life.

Thank you to everyone who made Katawa Shoujo possible.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Just give it a couple of weeks or so. This game seems to induce a sort of depression/love in people that takes a while to wear off.

Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
Music for a game that I am sort of working on:
Moustache Riders - Ignition
This seems to be sort of common in sigs here so...
Rin = Kenji > Hanako > Emi > Lilly > Shizune

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by griffon8 » Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:40 pm

GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
Nomiya in his hipster days.
I found out about Katawa Shoujo through the forums of Misfile. There, I am the editor of Misfiled Dreams.

Completed: 100%, including bonus picture. Shizune>Emi>Lilly>Hanako>Rin

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by Captain Hobo » Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:40 am

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Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Post by GIRakaCHEEZER » Thu Feb 23, 2012 1:03 am

Captain Hobo wrote:
GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Just give it a couple of weeks or so. This game seems to induce a sort of depression/love in people that takes a while to wear off.

Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
It's been about 3 weeks for me now. The pink glasses feller is a random scribble I did getting familiar with SAI.
Time is still my recommendation. If you still feel down in a month or so though I would look at getting some help or whatever.

Also it really does look like a young Nomiya.
Music for a game that I am sort of working on:
Moustache Riders - Ignition
This seems to be sort of common in sigs here so...
Rin = Kenji > Hanako > Emi > Lilly > Shizune

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