Hanako Trial#1

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Hanako Trial#1

Post by PasterOfMuppets » Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:00 pm

http://fourfiveone.deviantart.com/art/H ... veOne&qo=2

First try ;P had to erase a lot... hope you guys like
Comments? suggestion? No trolling? :D
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Re: Hanako Trial#1

Post by Ahsab » Sun Apr 03, 2011 2:26 am

Thats pretty good, only suggestion is to fix the scars they kinda look like a big scab to me. No offense.
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Re: Hanako Trial#1

Post by griffon8 » Sun Apr 03, 2011 2:20 pm

Sorry, but the editor in me must point out you misspelled 'Katawa'…

Otherwise, I like it.
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Re: Hanako Trial#1

Post by PasterOfMuppets » Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:08 pm

griffon8 wrote:Sorry, but the editor in me must point out you misspelled 'Katawa'…

Otherwise, I like it.
HOLY SWEET MOTHER OF...!!!
I just noticed thanks for pointing that out D;
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Re: Hanako Trial#1

Post by neumanproductions » Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:51 pm

When I saw "Trial" for some reason I foresaw a Phoenix Wright reference.
Not to bad though, like i've said before to many artists; still on a higher level than myself.
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Re: Hanako Trial#1

Post by Sid Vicious » Wed Apr 13, 2011 6:40 pm

nice dude thats hall of a lot better then a lot of people can do
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