Lili's Art hole

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Lili's Art hole

Post by lilirulu » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:34 pm

Hi...I'm new to the forum. I've been lurking most of the time(does this forum have a "new members here page".... So here is some sketchies of KS I only have 2 ATM

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Misha found a shiny thing...Wahaha~! The anatomy in this is AWFUL
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Hanako and my OC Azu (Who I was planning on putting in a VN too~)

There both were burned and are shy~ XD; Tis' Ironic...

I'll post more when I have more OoO

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Esa94 » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:38 pm

lilirulu wrote:There both were burned and are shy~ XD; Tis' Ironic...
I don't see the irony for some reason. They're similar, so it's... ironic?

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Xybaro » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:41 pm

Esa94 wrote:
lilirulu wrote:There both were burned and are shy~ XD; Tis' Ironic...
I don't see the irony for some reason. They're similar, so it's... ironic?
I just don't think you get the deepness of the art, Esa.

Bravo!

Do post more.
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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by lilirulu » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:51 pm

Esa94 wrote:
lilirulu wrote:There both were burned and are shy~ XD; Tis' Ironic...
I don't see the irony for some reason. They're similar, so it's... ironic?
I guess that's not the best wording? I couldn't tell you. I found it funny that I had developed a character for a VN who had been burned and that is why she is shy (well, only around men), then I find Katawa Shoujo who has a similar character. (Of course, I doubt the character archtype (right word?) is very original, in the first place) .
I'm trying so hard not to write too much info on my characters, so it doesn't seem like I'm advertising my own projects...ono;;;

@ Xybaro: Thanks. I will :)

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Esa94 » Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:56 pm

Ooh, now I see what you mean. I want to hug your character, too n__n
(No, the shy girl archetype isn't original, but getting burned is certainly at least somewhat more original. And a perfectly valid reason for being shy.)

Also, I have to say that Misha's expression in that first pic is awesome. :3

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by SirMax » Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:31 pm

I really wish you'd go over these with a white brush, because I like how they look but the transparency makes it impossible to tell what's supposed to be what, especially on the second one where burns and hair flow into each other and make it look like a scribble.
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Post by lilirulu » Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:20 pm

SirMax wrote:I really wish you'd go over these with a white brush, because I like how they look but the transparency makes it impossible to tell what's supposed to be what, especially on the second one where burns and hair flow into each other and make it look like a scribble.
If you're talking about Hanako's scars...they are ouo;

This aren't my neatest sketches either...because normally I would never have overlapping transparent body parts (i.e.: Misha's hands)

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Ozymil » Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:26 am

The eyes of your characters are teetering on the AMICUTEUGUU~ kind of big that take away from the overall picture. Proportion-wise, everything looks good, though dear GOD how big are Azu's breasts? Not that I have anything against that :V

All in all, nice work and I would love to see more! It's very reminiscent of VCR's stuff.
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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by lilirulu » Sat Oct 16, 2010 10:08 am

Ozymil wrote:The eyes of your characters are teetering on the AMICUTEUGUU~ kind of big that take away from the overall picture. Proportion-wise, everything looks good, though dear GOD how big are Azu's breasts? Not that I have anything against that :V

All in all, nice work and I would love to see more! It's very reminiscent of VCR's stuff.
Azu has the third smallest breasts of all the girls for my VN, but her and the second girls boobs are only different in size by a small bit. (The first girl's a giant so even if she was a A-Cup her boobs would still be bigger then rest of the cast) But to be honest her boobs are a little to big in this picture.

Thanks~ :)

Oh hay~ I drew Hideaki
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The face looks funny ono;;;;

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by lilirulu » Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:51 pm

I hope you guys don't mind more crappy chicken scratch drawings~

Halloween is coming up (at least where I live) so here are some halloween-themed sketches! woooooooooo~ :oops:

Also, Sorry for the double post~

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Lilly as a vampire~

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Kenjistein?

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Nurse as a Nurse.....how clever~

Also, about his hand. I couldn't find a good front view needle holding reference. so yeah...

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and Hanako is a exorcist~ :)

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by neumanproductions » Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:52 pm

Hey look, its the Ba Donka Donk chick.
I value the Kenji on the most of all. It's alive!

Thanks for the halloween stuff for it has inspired a KS Halloween fic; even thought they don't celebrate in a western-style it still wouldn't hurt. It is fiction after all.
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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Linch » Sat Oct 23, 2010 5:38 am

Clever Idea making a Mishakenstein laughing Wahahaha! instead of kenji.
Lilly on a Nun Outfit. mhhhmm *drool*

Wait,What about rin? D:<
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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by lilirulu » Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:58 pm

Linch wrote:Wait,What about rin? D:<
Here's Rin~

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Heh~ Thanks for reminding me I wanted to draw this for awhile now~

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I was gonna have Kenji dress up as KAITO but I changed it to Protoman :p Hisao is a bunny...just cause....

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"Whose subordinate is better?"
"We will never know..."
I may do a finished version of this some day~

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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Warwick » Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:38 am

Oh gosh these are all adorable. Lilly's looking very seductive, there...

As for nurse... Maybe want?
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Re: Lili's Art hole

Post by Linch » Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:33 am

Aawwwwwwww.
I see what you did with Rin, Clever!

As for Nurse, Meh!Want?Maybe -_-

Next Is Hideaki. right? o;
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