Stuff I did

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Unami Araragi
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Stuff I did

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This was my first time drawing KS characters, I thought I did a pretty decent job. I didn't like how Hanako's eye turned out, that bugged me.
7/8 stood for the day when I drew this, which was July 8, 2009... almost a year ago.
I know, shame on me for drawing on line paper.
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/3785 ... hizune.png
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It looks good, very close to the original. I like it.
Although, it was a pretty bad idea to write the date of the drawing directly into the picture. :wink:
Yuuko > Misha > Emi > Hanako > Lilly > Shizune > Rin
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I say you did a pretty good job. the proportions look fine to my amateur eye.
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Awww, they're good!

I think you should have made a little bit of Hanako's scars visible, though.
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Thank you! I left out the scars because I didn't know how to draw it.
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Post by Quidoo »

Hanako's eye looks perfectly fine to me. I think that you captured their characters perfectly.

You could perhaps improve them by adding more detail to the hair and by shading a little, but then again, that may over-do them and ruin the style.

No, they're good. Me likey. :D
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Post by Esa94 »

Great job on those drawings. Hanako looks just fine, at least when comparing that drawing to the Hanako in the upper-right corner of my screen. I can see why the eye bugs you, but it doesn't make the drawing look any worse. And Shizune looks like herself.

I want to learn to draw, too :/
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