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This is My Fan Art

Post by suoan » Wed Apr 07, 2010 12:24 pm

I love Rin Tezuka !!! I love this game. :oops:
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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Panty Supervisor » Wed Apr 07, 2010 12:56 pm

I think Shizune's shoulders look slightly too broad, it feels like she could easily beat Hisao up. But considering his condition, I guess that every girl in the game could do that. :D Also, it feels like the left eye (right eye from the viewer) of each girl is a little off balance. And Emi's twintails are a little too far away from her head. But those are just some minor points. Overall, I like your drawings, especially Lilly's wild look. It looks like she just went through the rain with her hair still being wet.
Yuuko > Misha > Emi > Hanako > Lilly > Shizune > Rin

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Esa94 » Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:50 pm

suoan wrote:I love Rin Tezuka !!!
Excellent!

Those drawings aren't bad. I think - like Panty Supervisor just mentioned - that the left eye of each girl is somehow distorted or something. Apart from that, Lilly looks fine to me as is. Also, IIRC, Misha had, uh, what's it called, back hair?

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Scarlet Fox » Wed Apr 07, 2010 5:41 pm

I agree with the criticism of the eyes, though they all seem somewhat off to me, just their left eye more so. My favorite drawing here's Lilly, followed by Hanako (some people don't put burn scars on her leg, but I think she has them there since they're covered up!).

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Stevie Wind-Up » Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:45 pm

These are awesome! There is only one complaint, that being that Rin's right eye does seem a little off, as the others said. I think it's fine with the other girls, though.
I was surprised to see that Rin had shoes on, since that would make her unable to do all of the things that she does with her feet, but then I noticed that they were the kind of shoes that can slip on and off quite easily, thus allowing her to use her feet whenever she needs to, but still protect them when she's walking around. Nice touch.
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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Hydra » Fri Apr 09, 2010 5:22 am

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sorry, but its the only thing i can think of

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by -abscess » Fri Apr 09, 2010 7:40 am

Hydra wrote:sorry, but its the only thing i can think of
.........
I think something just died inside of me.

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Esa94 » Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:12 am

Hydra wrote: sorry, but its the only thing i can think of
WHAT IS THAT

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Smoku » Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:21 am

Esa94 wrote:
WHAT IS THAT
That are eyes a "little" bit off :D

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Esa94 » Fri Apr 09, 2010 8:35 am

Smoku wrote:
Esa94 wrote:
WHAT IS THAT
That are eyes a "little" bit off :D
Yeah, a little.

THAT IS NOT A HUMAN THAT IS A FISH.

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Hydra » Fri Apr 09, 2010 10:36 am

Esa94 wrote:WHAT IS THAT
it is clearly kawaii, uguu

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Juno » Fri Apr 09, 2010 2:28 pm

If "kawaii uguu" means "toad with a wig" then yes, it is.

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Merlyn_LeRoy » Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:58 pm

You know how Itchy & Scratchy is a cartoon within a cartoon?
Well, that's an anime character within an anime.

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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by Caesius » Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:11 am

I think you did well on Lilly, though as has been mentioned you do need to practice getting eyes symmetrical.


Also it's a good thing I didn't need to pee harder than I did when coming into this thread.
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Re: This is My Fan Art

Post by The Biologist » Sat Apr 10, 2010 10:52 am

That's a fucking praying mantis. I think Emi biting your head off during intercourse would probably qualify as a Bad End.

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