Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 7-7-19

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Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 7-7-19

Post by Lap » Thu Feb 14, 2019 7:14 pm

It occurred to me that folks keep saying that Miki isn't dark skinned, she's just tanned. And tanned implies tan lines. So...
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Re: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

Post by Scroff » Fri Feb 15, 2019 7:41 am

Careful Miki, sunburn on the tops of your feet is the worst!

Lovely to see her happy and confident without her bandage

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Re: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

Post by Oddball » Fri Feb 15, 2019 9:22 pm

Very nicely done. I love the shading work and the extra attention you paid to the tanlines.
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Re: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

Post by Razoredge » Sat Feb 16, 2019 10:14 am

I have to admit, the shades are very well done.

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Re: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

Post by Lap » Sun Feb 17, 2019 9:00 am

Razoredge wrote:
Sat Feb 16, 2019 10:14 am
I have to admit, the shades are very well done.

Teach me Senpai.
Assuming you were being serious...it's all in layering. Shade values are painted in a dark brown (in this case) on a Multiply layer at 15-25% opacity, depending upon the piece. Highlights (in this case, untanned skin) are painted in white on a Screen layer, also at lower opacities. Like so:

Base colors:
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Shadows:
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Highlights:
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With additional layers for hair highlighting & shading, blush on her cheeks, background, etc.
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Re: Miki on the Beach (NSFW)

Post by Razoredge » Sun Feb 17, 2019 10:44 am

I'm serious.

My shades are fucking bad even if I try my best to do it.

But thanks for the tips, I appreciate it.
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Miki keeping Suzu Awake.

Post by Lap » Fri May 17, 2019 5:50 pm

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Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 5-17-19

Post by Oddball » Fri May 17, 2019 9:16 pm

That's just absolutely wonderful. great work.

The only criticism I have is that Miki's skin tone seems a bit too close to Suzu's.
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Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 5-17-19

Post by Lap » Fri May 17, 2019 10:48 pm

Which is weird, given what their base colors started as.
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But it's easy enough to alter...
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Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 7-7-19

Post by Lap » Sun Jul 07, 2019 2:58 pm

Shy Hanako biting her lip.
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Re: Lap's misc fan art. NSFW. New 7-7-19

Post by Oddball » Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:16 am

Your color and shading on this one is awesome and I love how you did the scars. It's also nice to see a more realistic small breast size that isn't just anime boob.

There are two minor critiques I have though.

The line she has midface, it's hard to tell if that's supposed to be her nose or a stray hair at first.

I don't think the lip biting comes across that well in the picture either. Admittedly, it is hard to do in an anime style where character's aren't usually drawn with lips. Maybe you could show some teeth or color the top lip so it's more obvious she's supposed to be biting the bottom.
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