Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Mr. Jazzels » Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:30 am

The art is fairly impressive. I eagerly await more.

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Guest90206 » Mon Jul 23, 2012 9:06 pm

The scars on her hand look like fuzzy hair.


YOU WILL NEVER UNSEE HAHAHAHAHA
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Vivi239 » Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:54 pm

Very well drawn, I'm eager to see how it goes ^^

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Bluecoolman » Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:28 pm

This interests me greatly.
How's it going so far?
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Camoufrage » Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:34 pm

Bluecoolman wrote:This interests me greatly.
How's it going so far?
Sadly mystery cycle has been inactive. Hopefully he is just working on this, but we haven't seen him in a while :/
Guest90206 wrote:The scars on her hand look like fuzzy hair.


YOU WILL NEVER UNSEE HAHAHAHAHA
I'm just glad I'm not the only one.

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by mysterycycle » Tue Aug 28, 2012 3:51 pm

Thank you for all the compliments so far!
Guest90206 wrote:The scars on her hand look like fuzzy hair.
Ha ha... My wife said the same thing. I may need to fix that. Drawing burn scars convincingly is kinda hard. :D
Camoufrage wrote:
Bluecoolman wrote:This interests me greatly.
How's it going so far?
Sadly mystery cycle has been inactive. Hopefully he is just working on this, but we haven't seen him in a while :/
Camoufrage, that's precisely why I haven't been around. I felt like I wanted to have something to show when I came back, and not just hang around here milking people for comments. (That, and I haven't gotten back to running since my knee injury. But last night I finally broke down and bought running shoes, so...)

It's been really slow, partly because of work and other RL commitments, and partly because writing the script is taking me a lot longer than I thought it would (this is one of my personal shortcomings I discovered in art school; without a hard deadline imposed upon me, I move at a snail's pace). Also, I've redone the next page a couple of times for various reasons: I forgot that Hisao lived in a house, not an apartment complex, so I had to scrap that drawing; and for some reason I couldn't get Hanako and Hisao to look right - Hisao kept looking too beefy, and Hanako...just didn't feel right to me.

Having said that, I'm pretty happy with the script (I'm about fifteen pages in, I think, with a rough outline for the entire story completed), so it's just a matter of forcing myself to sit down and work through the first page. After that, I feel like it's going to be a bit easier going.

Hopefully I'll have something new to show everybody pretty soon.
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I hear what you're saying. My obsession with Hanako has only grown since getting 100% completion, and so I felt like I wanted to do this story to 'exorcise' some of those feelings.

But in my more ambitious moments, I've contemplated the possibility of doing another doujinshi after this one, building on Hisao x Emi. If I do that story, it will feature all of the girls, since it will take place at Yamaku.
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by slicer961 » Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:39 pm

This looks like it is going to be awesome! I can't wait for the first page! are you just about done with the first page? :mrgreen: I dont mean to rush im just a bit excited

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by ohceedward » Tue Jul 02, 2013 11:06 am

This is gonna rule.

That will be all.
WAHAHA!~

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by mysterycycle » Tue Jul 02, 2013 2:18 pm

I'm hoping so. My wife keeps bugging me to work on it, which is a good thing, considering how much I've been dragging my feet on it. As much fun as it is to have something with which to celebrate Hanako's birthday, I think it would be better if I didn't only do a page a year. :oops:
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Gamera Ramen » Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:42 am

Better than .5 page a year, right?
please update faster before we riot in the streets
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Seeker91 » Wed Jul 03, 2013 12:52 pm

Looks amazing.
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Sea » Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:42 pm

*spams F5*
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