Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

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Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by mysterycycle » Thu Jul 12, 2012 2:48 pm

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So here it is, my first attempt at fan-fiction: a Katawa Shoujo doujinshi about Hisao and Hanako, post-Good Ending.

I'm working on the script and the pages in my spare time, so I can't make any promises regarding how long it's going to take me to complete this. However, I'll post each page as I complete it.

In addition to the desire to write KS fanfic, I'm using this project as an excuse to accomplish two things: first, to return to a more manga-like style, something I haven't done since high school; and second, to teach myself to use Manga Studio EX, which I've had for quite a while but never really did much with.

I hope you enjoy it!
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by KiraYamato74 » Fri Jul 13, 2012 11:36 pm

Very nice! I'm looking forward to seeing more of this as it comes to fruition. I've been meaning to try out Manga Studio EX, too, but I've been too busy to do fun stuff like draw. :( Can't wait to see a good Hanako story!

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Ozymil » Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:06 am

Wow, looks great! Here's to hoping that you don't gradually disappear like a lot of the other prospective projects do.
Donnes-moi le chocolat, Hisao! Gib mir die Schokolade, Hisao! Dame el chocolate, Hisao! Dammi il cioccolato, Hisao! Ge mig choklad, Hisao! Giv mig chokolade, Hisao! 私にチョコレートを与える, 久夫! Daj mi czekoladę, Hisao! Geef me de chocola, Hisao! (Thanks for the Dutch ver. Leotrak) Bigyan mo ako ng chocolate, Hisao! Geef mij de chocolade, Hisao! Дайте мне шоколад, Хисао! Dá-me o chocolate, Hisao!

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Camoufrage » Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:42 am

What I think would be a nice idea would be a comic book style video fanfic with full voice acting. THATD be impressive to see. Get some people to do voice acting and everything. But the art you posted definetely looks nice. Did you draw it?

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Post by mysterycycle » Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:40 pm

Ozymil wrote:Wow, looks great! Here's to hoping that you don't gradually disappear like a lot of the other prospective projects do.
Thanks! Sticking to the project has always been a challenge for me, but I think art school helped me to develop a bit more of a work ethic. Having said that, the greatest motivation for me to keep at it is the knowledge that other people here and on DeviantArt will be reading it.
Camoufrage wrote:What I think would be a nice idea would be a comic book style video fanfic with full voice acting. THATD be impressive to see. Get some people to do voice acting and everything. But the art you posted definetely looks nice. Did you draw it?
Yes, I did - I'm doing the whole thing, art and writing.
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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Camoufrage » Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:28 pm

mysterycycle wrote:
Camoufrage wrote:What I think would be a nice idea would be a comic book style video fanfic with full voice acting. THATD be impressive to see. Get some people to do voice acting and everything. But the art you posted definetely looks nice. Did you draw it?
Yes, I did - I'm doing the whole thing, art and writing.
One helluva an artist, I must say. Here's to hoping the writings any good :lol:

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Post by AlchemistR » Mon Jul 16, 2012 5:47 pm

I'm quite a Hanako fan, so I absolutely cannot wait to read this, it looks like it is gonna be awesome.
I've known of the game since around its official release and have lurked around the forums for a while, but I only just now made an account for the sheer fact that I wanted to reply to this topic.
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Post by Total Destruction » Mon Jul 16, 2012 6:44 pm

HOW DID I MISS THIS

THIS IS DELICIOUS

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Post by M4rked0ne » Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:52 am

I'm looking forward to read it, looks promising.

I have a little question regarding the time the story starts: Does it hook up directly on the good-ending in the VN or is there a time jump? This matter always makes me curious.^^
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Post by Sajomir » Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:41 pm

Hot-damn that looks like you could make something nice :D

I use Manga Studio EX myself. It's quite a useful program if you don't need the infinite bells and whistles (and price) of Photoshop!
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Post by mainframe004 » Sun Jul 22, 2012 11:31 am

W-wow, this looks phenomenal. Looking forward to it!


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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by Hongu » Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:53 pm

Looks interesting I must say. Hanako is a decent character, but I must say that I'm slightly annoyed that she seems to overshadow every other character. I mean, I understand why people love her, but to me she seems a bit...overrated. Give the other girls the attention they deserve! D:

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Re: Where You Once Belonged (Hisao and Hanako WIP Comic)

Post by LOL WUT » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:42 am

Hongu wrote:Looks interesting I must say. Hanako is a decent character, but I must say that I'm slightly annoyed that she seems to overshadow every other character. I mean, I understand why people love her, but to me she seems a bit...overrated. Give the other girls the attention they deserve! D:
I can see what you are getting at. Although either I suck at searching for things, or I am blind, but I have seen my fair share of fan fics for the girls and I think its a pretty 23%
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Now I do understand its a not a evenly spread out percentage but it will do...
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Post by JTemby » Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:06 am

LOL WUT wrote: I don't know what the Fuck I am talking about!
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Post by LOL WUT » Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:29 am

JTemby wrote:
LOL WUT wrote: I don't know what the Fuck I am talking about!
So remember kids.
Never trust me when precentages are involved!
Hahahaha
You are one peculiar person I must say.
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