I posted this over on Youtube and GameFAQS:
"This is going to sound really harsh. I don't recall clicking on "23 things Mickey Mouse wouldn't say". Never in my life have I ever heard someone who talks with that high pitched a voice. And do recall that Misha has a 'lilting' voice, which I guess means kinda sing-song. You need to work on this.
To recap; lower the pitch a fair bit and sing some of your words. Best of luck for KSMI.
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