A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in space

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Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s

Post by brythain » Fri May 01, 2015 4:42 am

It's not a very Rin piece, somehow, although it has space in it somewhere.

Why not give her a bit more character, then transfer the text into the Fan Fiction sub-forum?
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Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s

Post by brythain » Sun May 10, 2015 9:28 am

ACTUALLY, you know what the idea reminds me of? It reminds me of 'Palinurus', the short VN from Watercress Studios that just came out for NaNoReNo.
Post-Yamaku, what happens? After The Dream is a mosaic that follows everyone to the (sometimes) bitter end.
Main Index (Complete)Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/AkiraHideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of SuzuSakura—The Kenji Saga.
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Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s

Post by Oddball » Mon May 11, 2015 12:50 pm

It really doesn't feel like Rin in the story, just a different woman that has the same disability.
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