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Atario
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by Atario » Wed Apr 29, 2015 10:20 pm
Negativedarke wrote:Okay, new headcanon. In her bad end Saki has a fatal version of her disease. In the good end it's non-fatal.

Whoa. Hisao has the power to alter her condition by making mundane choices!
brythain wrote:Exactly. You either have to be a family member or have a strong family connection.
[HERE] is a useful primer.
So… what happens when you go overseas, adopt, then come back?
NB: none of the above is a request
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Munchenhausen
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by Munchenhausen » Thu Apr 30, 2015 3:07 am
Atario wrote:Negativedarke wrote:Okay, new headcanon. In her bad end Saki has a fatal version of her disease. In the good end it's non-fatal.

Whoa. Hisao has the power to alter her condition by making mundane choices!
"Hisao, could you come with to me to pick up some paint supplies?"
"Sorry, Saki, I'm really busy with this!"
"Oh, okay..."
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Megumeru
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by Megumeru » Thu Apr 30, 2015 6:25 am
atario wrote:brythain wrote:Exactly. You either have to be a family member or have a strong family connection.
[HERE] is a useful primer.
So… what happens when you go overseas, adopt, then come back?
We don't. It's just not part of the norm.
There's a reason why we can maintain a 96% purity(?) rate

They say they hate Shizune? What is this? BLASPHEMY!
SHII-HAEL!
Shizune>
Rin>
Emi>
Hanako>
Lilly
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Eurobeatjester
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by Eurobeatjester » Thu Apr 30, 2015 8:20 am
Megumeru wrote:atario wrote:brythain wrote:Exactly. You either have to be a family member or have a strong family connection.
[HERE] is a useful primer.
So… what happens when you go overseas, adopt, then come back?
We don't. It's just not part of the norm.
There's a reason why we can maintain a 96% purity(?) rate
It's also one of the reasons why Japan has one of the lowest birth rates in the world

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Negativedarke
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by Negativedarke » Thu Apr 30, 2015 8:59 am
Eurobeatjester wrote:
It's also one of the reasons why Japan has one of the lowest birth rates in the world

Also the cost of raising a child in Japan is pretty high.
Okay so lets review.
Saki went to the same catholic school as Lilly, and the two were friends. Saki is the girl who confessed to Lilly. When Saki was diagnosed she rushed out to loose her virginity, to the sensei Lilly had a crush on. This soured their relationship. Also a cane duel. Saki had sex with Misha at some point. Once Saki gets in a relationship with Hisao she takes it slower because of her past regrets. Depending on choices made in the game one of them might die much sooner than the other.
Now we need to work a best freindship with Rika in.
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by Gajzla » Thu Apr 30, 2015 11:32 am
Negativedarke wrote:Now we need to work a best freindship with Rika in.
For some reason I can never see these two as best friends, I don’t really know why. I think because I have a Rika fic I want to write, my personal head cannon gets in the way.
Reading about
Edgy RIka hasn’t helped either.
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Eurobeatjester
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by Eurobeatjester » Thu Apr 30, 2015 4:25 pm
I'm furiously rewriting my outline to figure if I can work in an implied encounter with Misha..
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by Gajzla » Thu Apr 30, 2015 5:18 pm
Eurobeatjester wrote:I'm furiously rewriting my outline to figure if I can work in an implied encounter with Misha..
Screw implied, just write a sexy one shot ^_^
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Eurobeatjester
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by Eurobeatjester » Thu Apr 30, 2015 6:07 pm

I doubt my ability to write convincing lesbian erotica
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by Steinherz » Thu Apr 30, 2015 8:08 pm
Eurobeatjester wrote:
I doubt my ability to write convincing lesbian erotica
Can you do convincing heterotica? If so, you can write lesbian erotica

I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
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Eurobeatjester
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by Eurobeatjester » Thu Apr 30, 2015 10:59 pm
I can, but only because of my rather extensive first hand knowledge of the subject.
That being said, one of my kinda peeves in fiction (and in porn, lets be honest here) is you can totally tell if a scene is written by a man or woman depending on who the target audience is. I'm afraid my attempt at lesbian erotica would be obviously written by a dude to appeal to other dudes.
Of course, with a proofreader...
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by Blank Mage » Thu Apr 30, 2015 11:37 pm
Eurobeatjester wrote:
I doubt my ability to write convincing lesbian erotica
believe in yourself
And we're back.
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Munchenhausen
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by Munchenhausen » Fri May 01, 2015 3:02 am
Eurobeatjester wrote:I can, but only because of my rather extensive first hand knowledge of the subject.
That being said, one of my kinda peeves in fiction (and in porn, lets be honest here) is you can totally tell if a scene is written by a man or woman depending on who the target audience is. I'm afraid my attempt at lesbian erotica would be obviously written by a dude to appeal to other dudes.
Of course, with a proofreader...
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Megumeru
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by Megumeru » Fri May 01, 2015 3:08 am
Eurobeatjester wrote:
It's also one of the reasons why Japan has one of the lowest birth rates in the world

That as well, but it also comes down to language barrier. You can try adopting, but good luck on making him/her integrated to society that is still *mostly* xenophobic.
Bilinguals (fluent ones) are rare. Not to mention, having a family is expensive so most people chose not to get married, get a load of money, and enjoy life

They say they hate Shizune? What is this? BLASPHEMY!
SHII-HAEL!
Shizune>
Rin>
Emi>
Hanako>
Lilly
"A writer is a light that reveals the world of his story from darkness. Shapes it from nothingness. If the writer stops, the world dies with it." - Alan Wake
Yes, I write stories. Currently working on:
The Haunting: A Love Story
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Valjean Lafitte
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by Valjean Lafitte » Fri May 01, 2015 5:54 am
Charmant wrote:
Sounds entirely too likely...Poor Saki. And poor brainwashed Lilly.

Right. Because no one can develop their own personal convictions without being brainwashed.
My headcanon for Naomi and Natsume is that they're totes gay for each other, but that's mostly thanks to this picture:
Hanako is completely oblivious to the nature of their relationship, however, until one night, during a hotel stay on their Kyoto trip, she walks in on them doing the deed.

"I wonder what is it about the rain?"
"Everything."