4LS Secret Santa 2012

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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by themocaw » Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:55 pm

Re: Katawa Mecha Pilots
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"Nakai, what do you think the purpose of this school is?"

"To train mecha pilots, of course."

"Wrong," Captain Mutou said. "If we wanted to do that, we would have used a military academy. Look around you, Nakai," he said, gesturing broadly to the school as a whole. "This school is about giving you a future beyond fighting the ANIMA. Think about it this way. If we expected you all to do this for the rest of your lives, would we bother with so much effort?"

Our moment of contemplation is immediately ruined by the sound of a loud klaxon and flashing red lights. "Scramble warning, Nakai," Mutou says, putting his uniform cap back on. "Let's go to work."

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RHYTHMIA. A strange word. An ugly word.

The first cases of it were recorded shortly after the first of the ANIMA invasions, shortly before I was born. We're still not sure what it is, but it attacks the nervous system.

In some cases, like Shizune's it attacked the aural centers of the brain, rendering one deaf and mute. Lilly was hit with a strain that attacked her optic nerves, leaving her blind. In other cases, the nerve damage resulted in necrosis, requiring amputation of the affected limbs. In other cases, like Hanako's, it rendered a portion of her body insensate. Unable to feel anything.

Not every child was affected, of course. For a long time, my parents and I thought I was one of the lucky ones. As it turned out, RHYTHMIA had attacked my heart instead. It first manifested itself on one snowy day when another RHYTHMIA carrier, Iwanako, confessed to me.

You see, RHYTHMIA isn't just a virus. It's some sort of quantum entanglement phenomenon. Emotional and spiritual closeness allows two carriers of the disease to create a kind of space-time feedback loop. The resulting nexus, or Synchronicity, is what makes RHYTHMIA patients so important to the war.

Because only two RHYTHMIA carriers working in tandem can pilot the God-Machines that fight the war against the ANIMA.

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I was going to write more, with Lieutenant Satou being transferred to AVALON base, and Misha reflecting on the fact that Hisao and Shizune make a better pilot team than she and Shizune ever were, and maybe Emi not wanting to get close to Hisao because her last partner had been killed in battle, but I think that would be putting too much work into a silly idea. :P

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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by MusedMoose » Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:04 pm

themocaw wrote:I was going to write more, with Lieutenant Satou being transferred to AVALON base, and Misha reflecting on the fact that Hisao and Shizune make a better pilot team than she and Shizune ever were, and maybe Emi not wanting to get close to Hisao because her last partner had been killed in battle, but I think that would be putting too much work into a silly idea. :P
...whoa. That was awesome, and not silly at all. The stuff you came up with to make the characters work in that setting was very nifty. I'd read a whole story of that. ^_^

As for the mecha pilots pic itself, I like it. Emi riding on Rin is oddly hilarious. ^_^ Though I do feel sorry for Misha, the way she's looking at Shizune who's just plain looking the other way. Grr. Arg.
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Gamera Ramen » Mon Dec 17, 2012 9:08 pm

I would pay to read a story like that, and I don't even know what it's a crossover of!
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by vaultzero » Mon Dec 17, 2012 11:21 pm

I just wanted to express my gratitude for this great new artwork. KS Mecha Pilots is particularly awesome and beautiful.
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Xanatos » Mon Dec 17, 2012 11:41 pm

MusedMoose wrote:and not silly at all.
Okay, I agree that was pretty awesome, but now you're just kissing ass. :lol: That post was completely silly and even he knows it. xD
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by MusedMoose » Tue Dec 18, 2012 12:49 am

Xanatos wrote:
MusedMoose wrote:and not silly at all.
Okay, I agree that was pretty awesome, but now you're just kissing ass. :lol: That post was completely silly and even he knows it. xD
Nah. I've just been on the internet long enough to know that one person's silly is another person's serious. ^_^

And I'd totally steal the basis for the story if it wouldn't be blatant and obvious theft. Eh heh heh.
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by themocaw » Tue Dec 18, 2012 2:58 am

MusedMoose wrote:
Xanatos wrote:
MusedMoose wrote:and not silly at all.
Okay, I agree that was pretty awesome, but now you're just kissing ass. :lol: That post was completely silly and even he knows it. xD
Nah. I've just been on the internet long enough to know that one person's silly is another person's serious. ^_^

And I'd totally steal the basis for the story if it wouldn't be blatant and obvious theft. Eh heh heh.
Go ahead and steal it.

Anyway, this is a derail. :(

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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Xanatos » Tue Dec 18, 2012 8:53 pm

Latest pic is Misha Claus...By cpl_crud. And no offense to him but now I get the "crud" part of the name. :lol:
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by cpl_crud » Tue Dec 18, 2012 8:58 pm

Xanatos wrote:Latest pic is Misha Claus...By cpl_crud. And no offense to him but now I get the "crud" part of the name. :lol:
It is true. I have been blessed with many talents, but alas drawing is not one of them.

My apologies Duane. At least now I know whose Christmas I ruined. It was such an elaborate description as well...

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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Brogurt » Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:07 pm

I'm certain crud's drawing would have heralded the apocalypse much more effectively than whatever we'll be getting on the 20th

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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Oddball » Tue Dec 18, 2012 10:51 pm

Having looked at this and looked at some of the older pictures, I think Crud actually has gotten better.

Granted, that's still not saying much.
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by BlackWaltzTheThird » Tue Dec 18, 2012 10:56 pm

I'm just gonna pretend like Crud's picture was inspired by Tim Burton's A Nightmare Before Christmas, and thus Misha is acting as an expy of Jack Skellington. It makes the picture much more enjoyable that way.
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Kyvos » Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:04 am

Oh my god, Crud. It's... it's beautiful. I love the orange... er, thing.
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Xybaro » Wed Dec 19, 2012 1:18 pm

And lo, new crud art was born.

:lol:
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Re: 4LS Secret Santa 2012

Post by Xanatos » Wed Dec 19, 2012 1:46 pm

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:I'm just gonna pretend like Crud's picture was inspired by Tim Burton's A Nightmare Before Christmas, and thus Misha is acting as an expy of Jack Skellington. It makes the picture much more enjoyable that way.
...My god, it's suddenly beautif- Pfft. No. No, it still hurts. Christmas is cancelled. :lol:

(For all my poking at crud, I'd probably have turned out a worse picture. XD)
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<KeiichiO>: "That's a beautiful response to chocolate."

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