Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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You're best is to write your own.... ya know? I think I might do that! the story of Misao(f!Hisao) and everyone else. I'm excited!! let me actually finish this one me okay? haha



... Also I'm totally adding Sexy Male Misha the afro is too stronk ;)
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote:You're best is to write your own.... ya know? I think I might do that! the story of Misao(f!Hisao) and everyone else. I'm excited!! let me actually finish this one me okay? haha



... Also I'm totally adding Sexy Male Misha the afro is too stronk ;)
You know I might try writing one if it weren't for the fact that I have no talent (at least as a writer).
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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MegaMoto wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote:You're best is to write your own.... ya know? I think I might do that! the story of Misao(f!Hisao) and everyone else. I'm excited!! let me actually finish this one me okay? haha



... Also I'm totally adding Sexy Male Misha the afro is too stronk ;)
You know I might try writing one if it weren't for the fact that I have no talent (at least as a writer).
Haha me neither really but that doesn't stop me.... I just hope I can actually finish it, my Misha route fanfic didn't go too well
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote:
MegaMoto wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote:You're best is to write your own.... ya know? I think I might do that! the story of Misao(f!Hisao) and everyone else. I'm excited!! let me actually finish this one me okay? haha



... Also I'm totally adding Sexy Male Misha the afro is too stronk ;)
You know I might try writing one if it weren't for the fact that I have no talent (at least as a writer).
Haha me neither really but that doesn't stop me.... I just hope I can actually finish it, my Misha route fanfic didn't go too well
I really want a fanfic where Kenji makes a anti feminist formula, tests it on Hisao, and it turns him into a girl. Yes it's cliched it's cliched as fuck but want it. I might try to write a chapter and see where it goes. My biggest problem is grammar I suck at grammar.
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MegaMoto wrote:I really want a fanfic where Kenji makes a anti feminist formula, tests it on Hisao, and it turns him into a girl. Yes it's cliched it's cliched as fuck but want it. I might try to write a chapter and see where it goes. My biggest problem is grammar I suck at grammar.
That sounds awesome haha... and don't worry as you can probably tell from a few of my posts I'm not too great on grammar either. But some may forgive that haha.
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote:
MegaMoto wrote:I really want a fanfic where Kenji makes a anti feminist formula, tests it on Hisao, and it turns him into a girl. Yes it's cliched it's cliched as fuck but want it. I might try to write a chapter and see where it goes. My biggest problem is grammar I suck at grammar.
That sounds awesome haha... and don't worry as you can probably tell from a few of my posts I'm not too great on grammar either. But some may forgive that haha.
I'm most afraid of Xanatos and the fact I may write something so bad I can never show my face again. :lol: Well looks like I'll give it a shot I guess.... no promises.
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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MegaMoto wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote:
MegaMoto wrote:I really want a fanfic where Kenji makes a anti feminist formula, tests it on Hisao, and it turns him into a girl. Yes it's cliched it's cliched as fuck but want it. I might try to write a chapter and see where it goes. My biggest problem is grammar I suck at grammar.
That sounds awesome haha... and don't worry as you can probably tell from a few of my posts I'm not too great on grammar either. But some may forgive that haha.
I'm most afraid of Xanatos and the fact I may write something so bad I can never show my face again. :lol: Well looks like I'll give it a shot I guess.... no promises.
As long as the ideas are good you should be fine(example your Kenji idea), the main problem is the filler of getting to said ideas and plot points.... and writer's block... writer's block is the devil to writing, even for something merely like a forum post.
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote: As long as the ideas are good you should be fine(example your Kenji idea), the main problem is the fill of getting to said ideas and plot points.... and writer's block... writer's block is the devil writing even for something merely like a forum post.
If I publish it I'll make sure to mention you. Something like "For the son of a bitch (or just bitch) EyesOfLilly who got me to write this even though I promised to never write KS fanfiction I hate him/her so much." :lol:
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MegaMoto wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote: As long as the ideas are good you should be fine(example your Kenji idea), the main problem is the fill of getting to said ideas and plot points.... and writer's block... writer's block is the devil writing even for something merely like a forum post.
If I publish it I'll make sure to mention you. Something like "For the son of a bitch (or just bitch) EyesOfLilly who got me to write this even though I promised to never write KS fanfiction I hate him/her so much." :lol:
Haha you be sure to do that ;) I'll gladly take the blame.. Also might be worth reading the help/advice topics in the fan fiction section of the forums, I'm doing that myself. In the mean time I wish you luck on your fanfic and I wish myself luck too.
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote:
MegaMoto wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote: As long as the ideas are good you should be fine(example your Kenji idea), the main problem is the fill of getting to said ideas and plot points.... and writer's block... writer's block is the devil writing even for something merely like a forum post.
If I publish it I'll make sure to mention you. Something like "For the son of a bitch (or just bitch) EyesOfLilly who got me to write this even though I promised to never write KS fanfiction I hate him/her so much." :lol:
Haha you be sure to do that ;) I'll gladly take the blame.. Also might be worth reading the help/advice topics in the fan fiction section of the forums, I'm doing that myself. In the mean time I wish you luck on your fanfic and I wish myself luck too.
You blame one person for a fanfic? For my second fic I've blamed an entire thread for it's existence :lol:
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I'm thinking of writing a short preview version of my gender bender fanfic... would that be approven to post here?

or would it be better to post it in the fan fiction forums and link to it from here?.....
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote:I'm thinking of writing a short preview version of my gender bender fanfic... would that be approven to post here?

or would it be better to post it in the fan fiction forums and link to it from here?.....
The latter.
I write take a look, would you kindly?
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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Steinherz wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote:I'm thinking of writing a short preview version of my gender bender fanfic... would that be approven to post here?

or would it be better to post it in the fan fiction forums and link to it from here?.....
The latter.
I figured as much... well here it is

http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 39#p170039 I just mocked this up hopefully the real thing will be a bit better.
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Re: Genderbender: Katawa Shonen

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EyesOfLilly wrote:
Steinherz wrote:
EyesOfLilly wrote:I'm thinking of writing a short preview version of my gender bender fanfic... would that be approven to post here?

or would it be better to post it in the fan fiction forums and link to it from here?.....
The latter.
I figured as much... well here it is

http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 39#p170039 I just mocked this up hopefully the real thing will be a bit better.
Damn that was fast. I'm still in the early stages here. I want to now where I'm going with the story before I really start writing it. All I have that is concrete at the moment is a scene where Emi slaps the shit out of Hisao to calm him (her) down because this is obviously going to be a really serious fanfiction. :lol: How did you do it so fast ? It's actually pretty good although I've never been a big fan of the script format.
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MegaMoto wrote:Damn that was fast. I'm still in the early stages here. I want to now where I'm going with the story before I really start writing it. All I have that is concrete at the moment is a scene where Emi slaps the shit out of Hisao to calm him (her) down because this is obviously going to be a really serious fanfiction. :lol: How did you do it so fast ? It's actually pretty good although I've never been a big fan of the script format.
When I get down to it I can work pretty quickly, also I find listening to the OST helps a little bit. I had Student Council on loop while writing the parts with Misha and Shizuru foe example
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