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by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 13, 2012 11:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 52003

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-1 Complete

Day Two My second day of classes passes rather quickly. Granted, it's a Saturday so we only have the half day, but even then the day seems unusually short. After class Misha and Shizune (well, only Misha technically) try to talk to me, but I don't particularly feel like trying to follow the peculia...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 13, 2012 9:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 52003

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Days 0-1 Complete

Very constructive sir, I commend you on your excellent critique and eloquent choice of language. I shall be sure to incorporate your superior ideas into my work as soon as I am able. Thank you for lending me your precious time.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 13, 2012 7:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 52003

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Day 0

Day One 7am. Argh, mornings suck. That's one thing I didn't miss about school. But I have to be up early so I have time to meet with my home group teacher. When was that again? I search my memory for what the receptionist said last night. 8:30. Plenty of time... I could have slept in longer. I yawn...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 13, 2012 6:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 52003

Re: Arriving At Yamaku - Day 0

Thanks for the advice. Is the coloured text really that bad? I'll reset it to black then. I'm getting a bit aggravated with inserting it all the time already, so it's kind of a relief. Indeed you have picked up on those mistakes, I'll go back and fix them now. I'm working on the next part at the mom...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 13, 2012 4:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12
Replies: 96
Views: 52003

Greater Than The Sum (Finished!) - All days now up: 11/4/12

- Day Zero (this page) - Day One - Day Two - Day Four - Day Six - Day Eight - Day Twelve - Day Thirty - Day Thirty One - Day Thirty Two - Day Forty Nine - Day Unknown - Day Sixty Two - Day Sixty Six (Morning) - Day Sixty Six (Afternoon) - Day Sixty Six (Night) Day Zero I stand in the nigh abandoned...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Feb 09, 2012 9:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My Name is Not Steve
Replies: 12
Views: 12127

Re: My Name is Not Steve

The waitress turns to you, notepad in hand... What do you order? A. Coffee. Food groups, dammit. B. Tea. You're in a tea house, get your act together, you unshaved gaijin. [What kind of tea?] C. A glass of ice. No other customers are here, no one will care if you crunch like a rabid f***er. D. Cake....
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Wed Feb 08, 2012 1:46 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4581752

Re: Ask!

Guest wrote:Why did you censor Kenji's dick? I mean... cmon... It's a hentai game...
Who's to say Kenji actually walks around with a leaf covering his crotch when naked? I'm sure you could find some company that makes such a product.
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:44 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Hanako Picture
Replies: 6
Views: 6130

Re: Hanako Picture

That... is a very fine work of art. The technique is incredible and very realistic. I can't help feeling however that it underplays the size of Hanako's breasts. They seem... decidedly smaller than in her nude character portrait. However in saying that I'm merely nitpicking what is unquestionably a ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:36 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4989
Views: 4581752

Re: Ask!

Sorry if this has been confirmed elsewhere, but I'm short on time at the moment and I need to confirm this ASAP. Can I have the confirmation of a Dev that all of the girls are at least 18 in all of their respective H-scenes and or nude character portraits? I know for a fact Hanako turns 18 prior to ...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Mon Feb 06, 2012 3:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: My Name is Not Steve
Replies: 12
Views: 12127

Re: My Name is Not Steve

Haha you say that like it's over. It's still going, man. And anyone else with a GameFAQs account should hop on over and partake as well, it's pretty rad. The topic is here: http://www.gamefaqs.com/boards/650003-k ... o/61749675
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Thu Feb 02, 2012 9:33 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Would you play a "mental disability" VN similar to KS?
Replies: 193
Views: 75770

Re: Would you play a "mental disability" VN similar to KS?

I want to say first that I cbf'd reading all the posts, stopped on page 3. Anyway, if I were to read this I would prefer to see a few things done; the first of which is a change of the title. To call it "Mentaru Shoujo" seeks to associate the VN with KS, and whether intentional or not, thi...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Jan 27, 2012 11:42 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help
Replies: 143
Views: 75927

Re: KS Academic Conference Paper - Seeking Help

1. Hanako's; in particular the bad ending. I found myself relating very strongly to Hisao's personality in this arc, in that he desperately wanted to break those boundaries between himself and Hanako, so that he could better protect her from things that could hurt her. As I understand it, this desir...
by BlackWaltzTheThird
Fri Jan 27, 2012 12:32 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What else made you cry?
Replies: 270
Views: 79241

Re: What else made you cry?

Final Fantasy IX - The "You're Not Alone!" sequence. Enough said.