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I felt as if there was a bit missing at the beginning of the chapter, but after rereading the end of the previous one, I can guess what it is... I went and matched my description of the scene very closely with the details from the game to try and make it clear, but this chapter explains it directly...

This was fun to read, I like your main character (but damn she did that one dude dirty calling him out in front of the whole club). It's a refreshing change from having Hisao as the POV. Double refreshing for having pretty much a full cast of OCs who still feel very appropriate to Katawa Shoujo. You...

Heartbreak Don't really care for this one, Hisao is just pitiful and it goes straight into some fairly forced (IMO) melodrama. I think I have a bias against a deeply unlikeable male protagonist who does the woe is me routine to such an extent. Still could've been good if it continued but there's on...

Painful History of course.

I like it! I think there are not enough fics that focus on the interactions between the girls as opposed to Hisao x whichever one of them. I see how Hanako slips under everyone's radar and isn't considered a threat even though she got the original "cute" comment. She's gonna sneak off with...

Hisao thought that Emi was pushing him away, and because the story is told from his perspective, the audience is made sympathetic to it. I don't think it's necessarily the correct perspective, or the only lens through which to view things. What I saw was Hisao pushing something and making an issue o...

You guys don't give Emi enough credit IMO. I'd consider her one of the most mature, possibly the very most. The beginning of her relationship with Hisao is the closest to how these things start IRL; she gives him a bunch of obvious signals then just goes "I like you, kiss me already," no a...

Next chapter! Might add navigation links soon too. --- Chapter 5: Alternative The next few days passed in a daze. Misha’s whole life felt like performing sign language now—she was just silently going through the motions. She had enough practice that she could translate for Shizune on autopilot durin...

Super short, and not a lot happened, so I really don't have much to say. Well-written though.

She still seems a little unsure as she takes my phone, but she slowly gains confidence as she taps in the phone number. Waiting a few moments for an answer, she begins speaking. “Hello mommy, it's Shicchan~ . Yeah~, I'm borrowing a friend's phone. No, he said it wasn't a problem~.” Man this messed ...

Yeah, she'd probably fumble around with her words if she said it in person. I didn't figure that she would stutter or anything like that on a written note, though. I imagined it as something she spent the day thinking about and working herself up to (maybe she even meant to say it in person, but got...

Chapter 4: Confession Misha returned to find Shizune hard at work with the paper-sorting, brows furrowed in concentration. She was so focused that she didn’t notice Misha’s re-entry. Misha used the opportunity to sneak around behind her and put her hands over Shizune’s eyes, sliding them up under t...

I'd like to note that I fully support any and all sweatervest memeing.

Glad some people have enjoyed reading it! That really motivates me to continue. I think I'll add previous/next links and a table of contents if I make it to 5 chapters. You just need a good idea, some insp—in-spir-rate? In-spie… Inspiration! I always interpreted Misha's difficulties with long words ...

The Ties That Bind : Good and well-written overall. The first sex scene was a bit too graphic for me but maybe some people are into that. I'm not big on raw smut so I don't consider it my place to judge it very well. I liked that it was written from Lilly's perspective, then switches perspectives t...