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...that's actually a good question... I'll get back to you on that. *runs away*

Thinking about it now, I'm not really too sure about my intent when I wrote that line. XD

I did find it strange that this Hisao would be flustered by some sexual jokes by Emi, though. They have plenty of sex during the routes and there Hisao gives as good as he gets with those jokes. Would you happen to be talking about this part? “Maybe I don’t wanna be full of myself,” Emi says, sudde...

And again I wondered what the hell Misha was doing in Hisao's room. Considering this is set after Emi's route Hisao seems a bit too easily flustered in some scenes. Also he seems to alternate too much between helpless and worldwise between chapters. Still a good chapter. Gah, sorry, it's such a hab...

HOLY CRAP I'M NOT DEAD *NOTE* I realize that it took me forever to get this chapter out to y'all (literally over 2 months) and I apologize for those who were waiting! I've been really busy with school related things and my personal life as well, so my free time available for writing hasn't been quit...

Sure: Get into the head of your characters. Always ask yourself "what would character X do in this situation and why?" In this case my suspension of disbelief insists that Emi has absolutely no reason to be mad at Hisao, especially since he's shown to be completely honest with her just a ...

Personally, I try to establish a buffer of hidden backstory before such things happen. Then things seem more explicable to your readers, even if they're not quite happy about it, and you can also use that backstory to explain things explicitly if you feel your readers are owed more. In this case, I...

Awwww shit! Why couldn't we had Emi just beat the shit out of her? Would've saved me the feel trip. Hm, you make a good point there. *begins writing alt. chapter 3 ending in which Emi bludgeons Iwanako except not* Gah! Too much, too much. I'm surprised both Hisao and Iwanako (whose name you need to...

ERMERGERD, CHERPTER THRER Took a bit longer this time, but I'm extremely excited to bring y'all chapter three of my Emilogue fanfic. I hope y'all enjoy the lemons and the feels! Feel free to leave feedback, suggestions, or critiques below! After all, that is how I improve. ;P *NOTE* This chapter doe...

azumeow wrote:Also, enjoyed this chapter as well. The two weeks thing was probably a decent idea, all in all.

Thank you! I'm glad Mirage suggested it, otherwise I would have never even thought about it.

And if you liked those two chapters, you'd better get your lemons and feels ready for chapter 3.

Did Emi dye her hair? Since when was it pink? That said, I think pink highlights would work on her, though maybe not pulling a Misha and dying all her hair pink. Anyways, solid chapter. I really liked the Rin scene as short as it was. I feel like you got her down pretty well. Also, my favorite part...

Chapter 2 is complete! Hopefully this satisfies anyone who wanted me to write more. :P Chapter 3 will hopefully be complete at some point next week. All of the planning is already done, so I just have to sit down and write it. I suppose we'll see how it goes, but I'm pretty excited to start making i...

brythain wrote:Oh dear, so which appendage of you is he now?

Definitely my testicl- I MEAN, UH, Hisao represents my mended heart and my new found courage...yeah, that... ._.
(but seriously if he's any of my appendages he's probably my legs because they keep me standing)

I think the new version is better - what you you think? I like the new version more as well, since it makes the entire chapter a bit more believable. If I hadn't pushed the time forward a bit and added the phone call I think the minor changes would've gone unfixed. Like changing "pretty darn c...

Technically your story is very good - it's the story itself or the characterization that I find a bit strange. The way Hisao acts reminds me a bit too much of the chapter of Emi's arc I liked least - "Is Carnival" - what with Hisao trying to avoid Emi, but their relationship should have p...

azumeow wrote:That was beautiful.

Thanks!

Chapter 2 is currently being conceptualized, so hopefully it's not too long before I can present some new content!