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Shizune fanboys come at me.

A Shizune route will not happen. I'd rather write a Taro H - Scene than a route full of Shizune dialogue.

Psst. 'Living' is set before Hisao arrives.

Shail, since you're sticking around a lot. I'd like to know who's route you'd like to see first?
Disclaimer: May not actually have any bearing on which route I write first.

Implying they had a thing wasn't my intention. Another one of those things that will be explained later. Holy shit, you're right. I'm going to sue every English teacher I have ever have for not doing there job. I honestly didn't know. Thing about Kohta is, he's not good at facing problems. What you ...

Haha, can't believe I messed that up. I was writing pretty frantically though. Hopefully the Hanako fanboys don't hold it against me. I think the fact that it feels forced comes down to two things. The first being I haven't had a chance to develop the father character, nor their relationship. Somewh...

Mnnnnnngh. Damn, I woke up before my alarm, guess I must be nervous about today. What time is it anyway? I fumble to pick my phone up from the night stand. Shit! School starts in three minutes. I launch out of bed not looking to waste any time. I whip on my school uniform, grab a piece of dry bread ...

"And finally, this, my friend, is the literature club's room." He over dramatically gestures for me to proceed. The room is spectacular. The dull walls are covered by shelves full of books of various shapes, sizes and colours. There is a large table in the middle of the room with several c...

I try to resist it. I shield my ears with my hands, trying to drown out the maddening tolling of the bell. It's no use, the sound resonates through me and I can hear it with every fibre of my being. My whole world is absorbed in darkness and silence as I wait expectantly for the next chime. It rings...

It's more like meet, do whatever, life lesson, then reset. Like KS, or Clannad. Ahh, you're quite right. I always have trouble with multiple quantitative adverbs. I wouldn't say I haven't planned for the short-term. I already have so many starting points I can do, it's just a matter of making the de...

There's still so much left to do. I haven't even decided on the first girl yet.

Okay. Mirage. I'll fix the devoid thing. I'm not sure what you mean by a word being missing though. The sentence is essentially saying that his voice was more serious than he had intended it to be. As for the foreigner thing. This was an intentional decision. I wanted to intensify a point I make lat...

Made a few quick changes in red(I hope it's red..), I usually don't notice these things but I'm getting better, which is good because I have to recheck my own writing far too often v_v.. A few things I'd like to mention(Haven't read part 3 yet) 1: I like what you did with Rin, too many people butch...

My footsteps echo through the plain, beige hallway. The hall is empty, adding to its dull aesthetic. I stop, gazing wearily at the door beside me. The sign reads "Head Nurse". I slowly move my arm to knock on the door, my mind still focused on my warm, soft bed. "Come in." A voic...

What a strange girl. And she didn't have any arms. How does she eat? Or put on clothes? I guess she'd have someone to help her do that stuff. Come to think of it, should I have left her out there like that? What if she can't get off the ground? I try to skip up the last step absent-mindedly, but kic...