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Well, that was interesting. Possibly more than one wake-up call in there along the way if they were paying attention. And yes, Emi probably would enjoy a Rin with penis at least once, just for the novelty of it. And now you just know she's going to have that image gnawing at her subconscious. And so...

Man, this is almost too cute. It's going to be hell when the other shoe finally drops.

In thinking further I don't think it's the POV that's the problem, at least for me. Rather it's that it feels like you had a beginning and ending in mind and are now trying to justify tying them together, but the natural flow of the situation doesn't lend itself to where you're dragging it. It's lik...

I Pretty much agree with everything Silentcook said. The basis for the story is definately intriguing, but it smacks too often of things happening because 'the plot demands it' rather than letting the situation play out in a way that feels more natural. I can accept Hanako placing inordinate faith i...

I'm disappointed you didn't use a much better song by the same name( but oh well. Also it's a bit hard to tell who is speaking when you break up what I -think- are continuous portions into paragraphs and don't attribute any of them properly.

Hmm... I don't trust Lilly in this just on general principle as much as her acting oddly, but it still feels like a major stretch to say she's involved in more than a tertiary way. Badmouthing Hisao after the argument enough to motivate Hanako to run off to a bar, for instance, though If she actuall...

Personally, i'm somewhat bothered by how soft and cuddly a lot of the fandom is, there's nothing wrong with being emotional, but... Anyways. Agreed, though I'd like to give people the benefit of the doubt and assume they go on and on about 'teh feels' because for whatever reason it's what they thin...

>That feel when you will never wake to find Rin making you breakfast.

Thanks for this great fic, Muphrid! I'm sad to see it end, but better that then let it get stale. I'm a fan of all three of those series so I guess I'll just have to check out your other stuff.

Well, that was cute. Playful sexy Rin is best Rin, but good lord Hisao can be slow on the uptake sometimes.

I think I went a little overboard with the backstory and exposition, but the plot is moving forward in other aspects so hopefully it won't feel stagnant and boring to anyone. Nah, not at all. Getting to know about somebody's past is very much a step forward in such situations. It would make things ...

She's been paid in advance for her client services... Mao isn't going to wait long before 'requesting' that service is rendered.

Also the fact that she accepted the cash is going to make it much harder to convince others she wasn't just another working girl.

Huh, guess I missed an update. Yeah, I'm glad to see Sumi let up on the reigns and realize that the Ryou she wants isn't one that can settle down just yet, and forcing him to live by her schedule is just breeding resentments. And Hisao would probably do very well in a think-tank sort of environment ...

Longest break yet, and not sure at what pace I'm going to continue. I'm not giving up on it. Btw, have there been interface changes? I can't seem to edit my posts anymore. Well hey there, stranger! :mrgreen: Can't say there's much of anything here that couldn't be inferred from earlier posts, but i...

As much as I like this fic, I'm ready for it to end already. Between the plot dragging and Suzu's thoughts seeming to take way too long to get from A to B sometimes I'm just burnt out.

Didn't know the name of it, but that would be my guess as well.