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That was too adorable. Can't wait to see the next part!

It lives! Good to see you update. I think you did a really good job with Yuuko's narrative, although I do agree that you could have stood to slow down a little more and go into further detail about them going around the carnival, give Takashi's cameo a little more purpose, things like that. I enjoy...

I like it. I'm playing back through Shizune's route currently, and it contains the most indicators about Kenji and Yukko's relationship - not the least of which occurs when Misha and Yukko come back to the library and Kenji immediately dives for cover . I think you could probably spend a little mor...

Loving this, so much! :D http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_kpox5qHMDM1qzma4ho1_500.jpg I can't ignore his girth. >2012 >Vekter >Writing I wish you guys would add me on Steam and bitch at me when I'm playing GTA4 and Binding of Isaac instead of reading. I have the shortest attention span ever. D: Oh...

Dr. Robotnik wrote:Try rereading this and imagine Kenji having the Soldier's voice. Fuckin' lol. Also nice fic, I like it.

I kind of imagined Kenji as a cross between the Soldier, Dale Gribble, and the nicest guy you'll ever meet.

Fuck.

Good story. I feel like Hisao kind of deserved it in a really fucked-up, cosmic way, but no one should have to go through that. Ever.

No writing in script, please work on your grammar, always have a proofreader, read some other fics before trying again buddy.

Dippeggs wrote:

Vekter wrote: “... Wait, if she's deaf, then why does she wear glasses?”

Did you get this from the "GIMME THE CHOCOLATE HISAO" Comic?

Yes. Yes, I did.

Hey, would ya look at that, I ACTUALLY DELIVER ON A DEADLINE. Short chapter, but the next one's gonna be balls long, so I think it evens it out. As always, read and review please! ----- Part 4: Drawing Treaties Purse, phone, keys, wallet, money. “Okay, I've got everything,” I mutter to myself as I c...

WOO, I'VE BEEN DRAGGING MY ASS AGAIN BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW STATUS UPDATE then. I've started writing Part 4, and should have it done some time between this week and next fucking month ( no I'm kidding here in the next week ) You guys are welcome to add me on Steam and bitch at me to write every so of...

WOO, I'VE BEEN DRAGGING MY ASS AGAIN BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW STATUS UPDATE then. I've started writing Part 4, and should have it done some time between this week and next fucking month ( no I'm kidding here in the next week ) You guys are welcome to add me on Steam and bitch at me to write every so oft...

Doomish, mah bro. Glad to see something upbeat from you for once! Strangely enough, I never actually considered that her persona as Misha wasn't her real personality . Naturally, I saw it as some kind of coping mechanism, but I never really looked any further into it than that. Very well written as ...

Good stuff, as always. Takashi can suck a dick.

Sorry for the double-post, but I've updated it once again. I think it's good how it is now, but let me know if there's anything glaringly obvious that's wrong with it.

The scarf was a nice touch. Otherwise it felt a bit too rushed. Agreed. I'm spacing it out a bit. Give me a minute to update. I'll probably screw around with it a bit tomorrow too. EDIT: Okay, I made her reaction a bit more realistic. I'll think of ways to space it out, but the whole conversation s...