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Alright guys, I finally beat myself up over putting off my little duties enough recently, so I finished up a little test of what I may do for page three. VALVE TIME STRIKES AGAIN. :roll: So, no, nothing is close to finished, but I do REALLY to hear want what you guys think, as I'm stuck with how to ...

I'm gonna take a little break from Katawa Haha. Do it. Don't force this stuff out, take some time, relax. TAKE IT EASY~ 8) It WILL give me time to catch up on/finish up Shizune's pages, yeah, so just slow your roll buddy. HanakoHanakoHanakoHanakoHanakoHanakoHanakoHanako I think I speak for everyone...

Third Panel : Rin: “Ken, you might not want to hear this or maybe you do, I don’t know, but…” I fucking love you SO much, no homo. :lol: Also I feel like a dipshit, I got so caught up with crap that I've been neglecting page three and so forth. Frazzum. Believe I'll sketch up something quick tomorr...

To be quite honest... I have no clue what you should go with. The reason being that I'm currently the visuals (yes incase anyone else wants to add art to these stories, I won't be the "I DON'T SHARE THE GLORY DAMNIT" artist here. :3), you are the brains. :wink: I only request that you make...

HAY GUYZ I'M STILL ALIVE. YAAAAY ALIVE WRITER IS ALIVE. Good to know that I'm not the only person who whups on themselves with their works. I do need to get caught back up though, TF2 and Fallout are sapping my attention (inb4 SPAH SAPPIN MAH ______) Anywhow, good to know that in 'theory', the page...

Okay. so, I sat down and tryed to adjust things to a more... well, natural form I guess. Mostly the crib and the pump, and in doing that Shizune's arm (damn me drawing her with her arm on the crib. sghfsgd). That, and her face is at a different perspective. I don't feel like doing anything like scre...

Oh squee, another page! To start off, great work man, lovin' the Misha-teddy especially; the hair looks better for some reason, can't exactly pinpoint what that is. Everything seems good to me in the first three panels, but I've got a couple issues with the fourth. First, the angles of the crib are...

something that is bothering me. I wanted to see shizune using the mammary milking machine. I was disappointed when I saw the author choose to do a back view. Not that anyone should go redraw it or anything but now I think we are in need of some shizune milking herself fanservice. If there's enough ...

GENTLEMEN! I BRING YOU... CORN! By which I mean, have page 2. Slightly easier thanks to three of the panels being small-ish and less detailed, and most of the detail that will make this look.... well, better, is going to come from whatever coloring I do. Same as page one really. :P Tried a few diffe...

Don't push yourself too hard, haha. We've lived through Blizzard, Valve, DNF, and now KS; waiting is no problem for the denizens of the interwebs. p.s. I just have to say, after all this time your avvie still fucking creeps me out. Konata or Carl, CHOOSE ONE . I'm more or less saying that because.....

Alright, I'm all sorts of pissed at myself now, I should've had this next page done already, but apparently I can't kick my own ass hard enough. sfdgsfdg I'll have page two up about... Saturday afternoon in general, and with luck, I'll either have page three done and up the same day, or at least nea...

Does Shizune seem...really short to anyone else? Or was the image shrunk vertically? She seems to have rather stubby legs. Other than that though, I'm liking it. Aaaah, it was a quick sketch on a scaled down copy of the page base I use for making these things, I wasn't going for perfect anatomy and...

Too late, must sleep. But first, comments! Now, I'm not too knowledgeable on art and such and I can't give you a "critic's review," but looking at this strictly from a geek's viewpoint, I like the panel placement simply because it seems to follow the "Golden Proportion." Jesus, ...

Alright, so, this is just something I may follow through for page two. There will be adjustments, like moving Shizune closer to the crib, changing the angle a bit, a few other small things which I'm sure will be told to me, (thanks ahead of time you guys. :3c) but apart from that, the MAIN reason fo...

Also, in response to boob size, we're talking a very loose fitting shirt/nightgown she's wearing, they're definately bigger than that. That just means they'd sag, not magically shrink down a few cup sizes. I'm not saying they have to be SHUT UP YOU TITTY MONSTER but they'd still definitely be large...