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Nice art! Looking forward to what's in store down the line. No rush, no push, just stopping in. I tend to get disheartened on a work when I don't feel like anyone's behind me, so consider this my declaration of being behind you. No bad manners or impatience, only good vibrations. I'm posting this wh...

Still reading, still enjoying. I was smiling by the end of the Mina/Hisao conversation, but my suspicions were confirmed when the family was revealed to have been eavesdropping or at least pulled the story from Hisao. I expect many teasings about this in the future.

I think it's just the nature of this story to feel finished when it's actually not. It's very masterfully written, in my humble opinion. Each segment of the story feels like a story in itself. I'm still getting that mysteriously contented neutral feeling that I described before, and I've even begun ...

Keep on fighting the good fight, man. In my opinion, a good story's worth waiting an eternity for.

dewelar wrote:Still, from the way she talked, I felt like she wasn't mourning our relationship so much as the failure of love to blossom in general.

After having read brythain's Kenji story Sakura, this kind of touched my feels center. Not sure why or how I connected those dots, but there it is.

Good to see you got your info, dude! This is one of my favorite fics now and it would have sucked to see it drop because of something like a research wall. Keep on keepin' on, and I'll see you on the other side of your next chapter!

Is it weird that I enjoyed this chapter? Maybe not so much the seething bitterness but more the fact that we finally got a look into Mina's inner workings and found out that things aren't as fluffy and cute as they are on the outside. The fact that we now have a sense of her struggles and her intern...

I've been waiting to read your After the Dream series until it was completely finished, but as an aspiring Kenji writer myself, I had to take a look at this. It was not what I was expecting. I was a little confused when I read some parts of this story, though I suppose you've done your job in making...

I'm looking forward to the nurse scene, specifically because it feels like you've done some research and have a mindblowing revelation to share with us. Call it intuition or insanity, I feel like there's a reason for Lilly's newfound ocular capabilities other than mystical space frogs and their cure...

I only have two words:

God
DAAAAAAAAAAAAMN

Not exactly OT, but related. You've been reading too much KS fanfiction when you begin to subconsciously reference it while writing. Fuck that, I'm creating an entire story based around a dude who learns he has SCA and begins writing a diary. It starts on Day Two Thousand, Three Hundred and Seventy...

Not exactly OT, but related.

You've been reading too much KS fanfiction when you begin to subconsciously reference it while writing.

Mina wrote:We're going to watch the sunset.

Made me smile.

I'll have to conform to Tealeaf's opinion on the ending scene as well; I've been diagnosed with diabetes because of this story. Really looking forward to the chapters to come!

I am enjoying this one quite a bit. Mina's a really engaging character, and I like how you've included just the tiniest hints of what her condition could possibly be without outright tipping your hand. Nothing's really felt forced so far, and it gives me an odd fuzzy feeling to learn that, for the m...

A very nice retroactive birthday surprise, indeed! Thanks for the continued excellency, man.