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Ask Your Friends [>Go after him.] This could. Uh. This could be bad. I bite my lip, already feeling anxiety begin to simmer or, or bubble in my chest. One of those. Both of those. But I take one more look at Hisao’s door. I could get him, ask him to help chase after Kenji. But with every moment tha...

That picture is great . Yeah, it's one of my favorites as well, I wish I could use it more often. As for the ending, I think I read something the creator of Homestuck said about how a continuous story changes based on how it's read. That is, if it is read from beginning to end as the content is rel...

the next chapter future chapters. http://i.imgur.com/c1WWV.png To elaborate: Previous I First To super -elaborate: please give the previous two/three chapters one more read-through. her stump is lying useless in her lap. And there's nothing attached to it today. Was there ever? Since she lost her h...

I have to agree with the others one this one, the writing here is nothing short of excellent. It's gripping, it's intense, it leaves you on the edge of your seat, even as it stabs you in the gut. In big, complicated words: it's really damn good. I liked what you did with giving us a look at Miki thr...

Fly Away (Another Day) No one seems to notice when I arrive to class the next morning with Hisao instead of Miki. My best friend is there in her seat, she gives me a wink that I can’t quite return, although I wish I could. Mutou is already at his desk, he doesn't even seem to notice I exist until I...

Drift Away From the moment my alarm brings me back to life, it feels like there's a weight on my chest. Or lump in my throat, or a... a weighted lump, what time is it? The shrieking continues but I just groan and stare into space between blinks, trying to recall what's bothering me, what's wrong. A...

Oh hey, I thought I'd write you an essay about your story's strengths and weaknesses. Just doing my thing. W-whoa. Thank you, and I mean thank you for only taking the time to read through that massive amount of words that is this story, and thank you for taking the time to express your thoughts so ...

While storyline branches are a valid (please note I didn't say "neccessary") tool in Visual novels, in a prose story you have to keep in mind that the story has to make sense all the same. A VN that wants to lure the reader to a bad end, sometimes has to hide a potentially dangerous decis...

H'okay, so, the timing of this is perfect for me. I'll start with my response to the newest post (eeeee!) then do a little catch up. I'm very happy Kenji and Shizune (Mutou too I guess) are popping back up in the story, makes it feel like this is a part (a pseudo-part if you will) of the VN. Since ...

City of One [>Do not pursue Kenji.] I stand there, rooted to the spot as Kenji eventually turns a corner and disappears from view. He didn't... he didn't really look that bad off. I mean, he was clearly drunk, but he was also clearly used to being drunk so maybe this is all in a day's work for him?...

Hmm. [x] Do not pursue Kenji. Perhaps its not the more compassionate choice, and it made come off as retaliatory for Kenji's past misdeeds but the level of help Kenji needs is something beyond anyone who isn't a professional can offer - and even then no guarantees of chance happening. Suzu's easily...

I was a little confused as to what exactly was happening in "What You've Done", but I found it a good read nonetheless. Jigoro is always an interesting character to explore and I like how you portrayed him. Yeah, that one could be hard to understand without some context, I see that. Jigor...

Just wanted to throw in my two cents and say that I'm really enjoying this story so far as well. I can tell that you're starting to get used to the more connected format and you're able to start playing to your strengths now, so I look forward to seeing where the story goes next.

Men of Snow (Misha) This is a piece that I've had laying around since somewhere around February, but finally decided to go back and revisit now. It was fun to look back at how my writing has changed and streamline some things that looked clunky, at least to me. I thought we'd have more time. I mean...