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- Sat Aug 03, 2013 4:52 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Emi inspired running/workout
- Replies: 2704
- Views: 1181931
Re: Emi inspired running/workout
Any idea how to help a guy who grew up eating rice as his carb of choice? fuck i meant to post this a while ago but i guess it might help now. i made a guide about buying running shoes somewhere in this thread if you need help with that as well. SemisoftCheese's Guide to Eating So great. You starte...
- Fri Jul 19, 2013 9:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 7/17)
Nice chapter, but it shows evidence of some heavy editing afterwards, for example: I showed up at the Yamaku track early on this Saturday morning. ... Or is it not weird to be on the Yamaku bleachers at 5AM on a Saturday morning ... “But we just ate! And it’s Sunday. or You have to have grass stain...
- Wed Jul 17, 2013 7:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Out Getting Ribs
Early to bed, early to rise. Makes a man stupid and blind in the eyes. I showed up at the Yamaku track early on this Saturday morning. Far too early, it appears. The sun isn’t even out and the sky is a pale gray. The nurse told me when I first came to Yamaku that I should start running to stay in sh...
- Thu Jul 11, 2013 5:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hide and Seek (Rin)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4154
Hide and Seek (Rin)
>write a fic about rin's parents The voice calls down from the hallway. “Rin, are you ready? Dinner’s waiting.” A tall, lithe, woman hangs in the doorway, but she’s young. She can’t be more than 19 and her body does extremely pleasant things to the loose shirt and jeans she’s wearing. Her hair, a t...
- Thu Jul 04, 2013 2:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 7/1)
first off, thank you for everyone who read/replied. i'm immensely flattered by the fact that people care enough to read let alone comment on my work. thank you all. I'm loving this, although I do feel like you're moving along rather quickly here. This chapter gave me some feels, but they could've be...
- Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Costume Party
It's Thursday morning at Yamaku Academy for the disabled. I have in my hands, courtesy of the kind Kenji Setou, two cups of warm, black, coffee. Among his many survival supplies for the apocalypse rests a coffeemaker, and after stumbling into me in the hallway, he offered to make me a cup or two. We...
- Sat Jun 29, 2013 1:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira x Miki oneshot (explicit)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5091
Re: Akira x Miki oneshot (explicit)
yes req
top miki game
top miki game
- Sun Jun 16, 2013 11:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 6/14)
You're moving Hisao and Ritsu along quite fast, aren't you? That's not a bad thing, though. Just different. I definitely enjoyed it! thanks! i think you're right, i'll try and keep an eye on the pacing Well, the personality you've given her is definitely something different. I like the story so far...
- Fri Jun 14, 2013 4:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Closing Time
"You know, Hisao, I'd never thought I'd spend the festival like this." The lean figure next to me gives me a casual look, a deep smile on her face. I give her a smile and give the stuffed monkey on her neck a tug. "The monkey, or the festival?" She just gives me a smile and looks...
- Fri Jun 07, 2013 12:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
- Replies: 68
- Views: 27663
Re: Miki Psuedo Route [New work, added 6/5/13]
I had my doubts about another Miki route, but it seems like you're doing just swelly. It's not my favorite Meadows-flavoured Miki, but I'm willing to wait (cough cough cough).
Very nice work so far.
Very nice work so far.
- Wed Jun 05, 2013 1:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)
If you look at the info screen you can see its an extra.
- Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Clair de Lune (Extra)
For Michael R. McClintock We're back on the hill again. It was a summer afternoon and I had been studying for a few hours. I needed a break. Only problem was, I had no idea where to go. I left the room… and my feet just took me here. The same familiar figure is there, wrapped in a blue cardigan on ...
- Tue May 28, 2013 9:45 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)
time for a marathon reply post. first off, a sincere thank you to everyone who's taken the time to read or reply. it means alot, and keeps me going. I really like your Hisao more than anything else. That's not to say I'm not enjoying reading Ritsu as well. Will definitely read this to the end! thank...
- Sun May 26, 2013 8:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
- Replies: 104
- Views: 56439
Alive
sorry for the wait The walk into town passes rather quickly. Ritsu sets a fast pace down the hill, her steps quick and sure as she descends. It seems like she's made this trip more than a couple of times before. From the back, she's got a weird style of walking. Most people bob up and down when the...
- Sat May 25, 2013 2:48 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: K-Shounen!
- Replies: 294
- Views: 74614
Re: K-Shounen!
okay i'm going to go out on a limb here and say what most people haven't said. your writing needs work. a lot of it. what you write often doesn't make sense and doesn't even follow the logical form of prose. sentences like "What Are You Doing Here?!", my finger is pointing at the Student C...