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Mirage_GSM wrote:I always prefer reading stories with OCs - if done right they have MUCH more potential for originality.
Just try to avoid Mary Sues...

I'm going to try to be careful with what my characters are able to do, and if anyone gets a whiff of Mary Sue just slap me.

Thanks for the comments guys! To address sending the main character to 3-3, I'm already writing outside my comfort zone about something I thought I knew a lot about, so sending him to a new class was too much work and risk for me to comfortably handle. I don't want this main character to replace His...

Despite being short again, I took a while with this one, I was mostly procrastinating or contemplating whether or not I wanted to continue the story. I'm more of a "Oh god ideas in my head vomit them onto paper blaaaaugh" writer, so I'm not used to the amount of preparation and planning th...

I... I don't... I feel a little sick.

Great writing once again, I'm gonna go curl up in a ball under my covers now.

I like this a lot, I think the relationships between all of the characters are well written. I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

A shorter chapter this time, next one will be much longer. Got a little stuck and I'm not completely satisfied with myself, but the next piece ought to be more fun for me, and hopefully for you too. Enjoy, and respond! Chapter 3: DFA Today was supposed to be a good day. It's been two weeks since my ...

Enjoying this story so far, the portrayal of his disability is something new and not over the top, which is good. Your writing style is enjoyable and solid, although there's a little bit of repetition here and there, things like "going to school" and "pamphlet". Just small thing...

I like it! Sweet, and a nice ending as well. I assume this is a standalone piece?

Hi! I'm back at it once again, this time we start to actually get to relevant bits! Despite never having any sort of head injury, or knowing anyone who has, I felt like this is something I had to portray well, or at least accurately. It's one of those things that feels like it hits close to home whe...

I like it, short and quite sweet.

Seems good afer a quick read, I didn't notice any glaring mistakes. One thing, it would be nice if you updated the title of the thread with the date when you add a section. Seriously looking forward to more of this. Thanks! Also good idea, I should do that. Also added a table of contents for the fu...

This is adorable! I thought that this was a well done piece, and stayed within their characters well, which isn't always easy.

Hi! I'm back at this, and hopefully this first chapter can get things rolling. My two big hopes are that this chapter isn't too technical from a baseball standpoint, and that it makes sense to people. Sometimes I write something that makes sense in my head and when someone else reads it they have no...

Well, my guess was he is mute, because otherwise he could have just called out to her - whoever she is. Muteness is hardly ever sports-related, though. I think the Japanese play baseball in much the same way everyone else does, but I can't tell you if you made any mistakes there, since I know hardl...

Hi! This is not my first time writing, but it is my first time doing something KS related, so I am understandably nervous. That combined with an OC makes this a bit of a challenge for me, so hopefully this is a fun learning experience for me. Everything is pretty raw at this point, but I hope develo...