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by Downix
Thu Dec 06, 2018 5:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 53
Views: 45015

When The World Stops Cold

Since it appears we are doing an advent calendar here, and someone posts a new story daily (many thanks to PKMN Thief Chris and Stiles Long for helping me edit this): Story for: Kiith Prompt: It is the evening of December 31st. Hisao and whomever he holds dearest in his heart took a little time off ...
by Downix
Sat Sep 15, 2018 4:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)
Replies: 9
Views: 4700

Re: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)

I suppose I'll leave the same comment here as I did on Discord, which is that Iwanako seems a bit lacking in presence. The conversation comes off as very one-sided, with Hisao sort of just relaying his life story while she listens. Which I suppose isn't bad, I just think I would have liked to see t...
by Downix
Sat Sep 15, 2018 9:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)
Replies: 9
Views: 4700

When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)

One of the things which saddened me is the dearth of Rin epilogues, and those I have found tend to be centered on Rin. So, for an idea I thought to see where things would go from the only ending in KS listed as a "True" ending in the code, Rin's neutral end. And it helped me process a few ...
by Downix
Mon Aug 20, 2018 1:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1198
Views: 986785

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 3 Completed 8/20)

Damn, that... damn. Wow.

You sure do hit in the empathy don't you.
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 9:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

I have a hard time believing it's just a coincidence arising from extrapolating what the problems were like from Wednesday. Especially when the rest of the scene, including the description of the problems, is ripped straight from MTtB Also, regarding the room number, there's a bit of weirdness aris...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

I do feel the need to point out that a section you point to is taken from KS itself, from the scene "Lunch Evolution Theory." When I actually look at the stuff, it's mostly just reading. In fact, there are only two problems. For Wednesday's groupwork. No indication on what Tuesday's was i...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 7:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Also for once not about the similarities to MTtB: I was reading the part after Iwanako ran into Emi (or I guess it was the other way around) and I noticed a continuity error. Iwanako says “Stairs are not a good idea right now. Glad I live on the first floor.” despite having room number 314, which w...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

I'm still in the middle of reading this, but from what I've read so far, there's a lot of similarities to Mean Time to Breakdown. Like you said, some similarities are inevitable, but there's cases here where it could definitely have been avoided. for example, you wrote: “Oh, there’s still ten minut...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

And there is Act 1. I should have Act 2 up next week.
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Waiting in the Wings I don’t know how I managed to make it away from them. I don’t know how I made it into the school itself. But that is where I found myself, moving swiftly down the hallway in the direction of the library. It’s got to be quiet. I can hide there. He won’t find me. He can’t. Not him...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Beware Unfamiliar Spirits 6am, again. Why can’t I sleep any later than 6 am? Groaning, I get up and take my first pill. If I take it with anything else, it would make me sick so the doctors tell me. Remembering Rika’s big book from the other day, this is the one which is supposed to make me gain wei...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

The Last Huzzah It is so good to sleep in your own bed… alone. I know it was only two days, but those two days felt like forever. Getting up early, I enjoy a long shower before I start my day. I have the time to prepare, skipping breakfast in the cafeteria, swimming, or joining Emi at the track, and...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Long And Winding Road Outside, the sun is still out, but there is the hint of eventual twilight in the air. Nearing the gate, it strikes me that this is the first time I’ve left this campus since Monday. I almost giggle to myself, feeling like I’ve found a new form of freedom while passing through t...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Echo Before Speech A half hour later, the curry and rice for lunch is packed up in four lunchboxes and we are on our way up to the roof. I can hear the various teachers lecturing, but the tell-tale voice of Mutou is missing. What room does he teach just before lunch anyways? “Iwanaga, it’s good to s...
by Downix
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 49775

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

The Key Unlocked The next morning comes far too quickly. Rika certainly takes her job seriously, but does she need to be that close? I pry myself loose from her icy death grip and pull myself to the bathroom. Last night we slept in her room, rather than mine, to ‘keep the experience fresh’ as Rika p...