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- Thu Sep 18, 2014 5:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
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Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) Act 1 complete!
Really enjoyed it. Probably the soonest any route has reached the first kiss(even though he didn't have time to reciprocate, there's only one way a kiss on the lips can be interpreted). Also, Why haven’t I shut my door yet? Not sure. I loved that line. Thank you Anton! :D I fixed the pacing now I t...
- Wed Sep 17, 2014 6:05 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81307
Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) Scene 3 up!
The end of act 1 folks! There is small nekkid scene in the bath between Fuji and Ayane but it's tame. No update tomorrow as It's open evening at school. 4.5k words. Enjoy! Act 1 Scene 4 If we could live like every day was Sunday. (She wonders if she'll ever find him, wonders if she'll ever fall in l...
- Tue Sep 16, 2014 4:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81307
Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) (working title)
Act 3! Just shy of 3k words. Most of my chapters seem to be around the 3-4k mark hoping to have some hit 6k. This here: http://rwby.wikia.com/wiki/Neopolitan/Image_Gallery?file=NeoCuteCurtsey.png is my mental image of Ayane in her casual wear (Minus the umbrella) There may be mistakes, even though I...
- Tue Sep 16, 2014 12:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81307
Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) (working title)
HI all, thank you so much for the feedback so far! In Japan the teachers change classes, not the students, so her friend would be in all her classes. Anyways, the only real complaint I have is more of a personnel preference of mine. Characters that say things like(I'm not sure I can ever love again)...
- Mon Sep 15, 2014 5:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81307
Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) (working title)
Authors notes: And so here we are Scene 2, well ahead of schedule. I'm not happy about the scene in the pool, it feels a little off. This scene sets a few breadcrumbs down for future plot points so pay attention! Bonus cookie for those that spot the song reference. Scene 2 Walk on the wild side I do...
- Mon Sep 15, 2014 12:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81307
Re: Learning the blues (HisaoxOC route) (working title)
First, thank you for all the kind words. I'm very flattered. I was sure that there were going to be some very major errors! The concerns about speed. Yeah I should probably re-write those sections to be a little clearer. Ayane at the moment recognises someone who feels very, very lost in Hisao and s...
- Sun Sep 14, 2014 4:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
- Replies: 162
- Views: 81307
Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Hi there! This is what my muse has been bugging me about recently and it started with some characters coming to life in my head... you can meet them here! http://www.reddit.com/r/katawashoujo/comments/2fqc4t/my_muse_wont_leave_me_alone_reddit_say_hello_to/ Beware I do not have a beta reader. I've ch...
- Sat Sep 13, 2014 5:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Hello! I am hunting for a beta reader!
- Replies: 0
- Views: 12736
Hello! I am hunting for a beta reader!
Hello there! I've been a lurker here for several months now after stumbling on KS via reddit. I've pretty much devoured everything the fandom has to give now and that was when my muse decided to jump on the mental bandwagon and wouldn't leave me the hell alone. Which led to these guys being created....