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I really, really like the explanation you give for the tea room. It makes perfect sense and just fits really nicely. there was a nice upbeat, hopeful tone to this piece and it was sweet enough to make me consider checking myself for diabetes. As always cloud, excellent writing and another piece that...

Oh, you sure know how to drive a knife into a poor sap's heart and twist it. I enjoyed that chapter immensely. The scene with Shirou and Rin was...uh....interesting. It makes some sense that Akihiro would do that, knowing the type of person he is. Ah, I have little of importance to say as usual, ot...

If its speech in Italics, assume it is in English. ****** Don't forget to live for love: part 2 As it turns out the film wasn’t that bad. One of those unremarkable thrillers that while it isn’t terrible, is easily forgettable. Still it does kill some time, and as I turn my phone back on, I read the ...

8k Update... in two parts... enjoy! Another nsfw part here... ***** Act 2 Scene 13 “Don’t forget to live for love” Waking up next to Hisao in my childhood bed is an odd experience. For brief moment I panic and wonder where I am, then everything clicks into place. I stretch and arch my back like a ca...

THE PREVIOUS SNIPPET HAS BEEN EXPANDED. Is this the same Akane we met in the first chapters or has she been replaced by her hyper twin? She likes festivals. First chapter you saw her when she was focused, this is her normally. Interesting names... Yang is usually a Chinese surname rather than a Japa...

Another one shot of this future route as a small break from the blues. Once this gets off the ground, the gap between the festival and spending time with Akanes Family would be expanded on but as this is a little snippet, I didn't expand it. Enjoy! -laughs- :twisted: ****** The brownie of Yamaku Sho...

*bounces on the spot* Nice! Like this part as well, I can really feel Hisao's internal struggle with his choices. Hehe I could see this as part of a route for several of the girls, depending on the choice made by Hisao! Hell you could even go into some of the other pupils for 3-3 Ever fancied doing ...

good to see you too Hazel! Gotta say, I like the avatar, is that from Scott Pilgrim? I was worried that the NSFW would be a bit crap but It seems to have come out ok. n this chapter I liked the first image you showed us of Ayane's mother, truly impressive and intimidating. I am very excited for Akih...

This is a nice way to wrap it up. I really liked the scene where Hisao is stumbling over asking Lilly about her disability. Felt very real if that makes sense and was well dealt with. I always do enjoy reading your writing Cloud. Not much apart from keep on with the writing! As always, good work.

Scene 12 is here! There is a slight NSFW part later in this chapter, - I was actually embarrassed as I wrote it - Still enjoy! Scene 13 is ready but will be released later in the week. *** Act 2 Scene 12 “The nightingale and its golden cage.” The car rumbles to a halt on the gravel of the drive, the...

It's a well-wrought fanfic so far, but I agree with dewelar that somehow it doesn't seem very KS in some ways. It seems to break cultural immersion in an unusual way, which works for itself but takes some getting used to. Otherwise, interesting work and appreciated! Yeah, I feel my 'Britishisms' ar...

I can't wait for what comes next. ... bigger events at the family gathering are just about to begin rolling. The dread and anticipation, the summation of Ayane's family... Oh it's going to be delightful to read what you're going to write. I assume that comparing what could happen for/to Ayane to a ...

Oh my god I got a review from forgetmenot! -must not squeal like a fanboy- I should not check this before heading to work. THE WHOLE SCHOOL DAY AKANE AND AYANE HAVE BEEN ARGUING ABOUT WHO GETS WRITTEN NEXT! Do you know how distracting that was whilst I was trying to teach with those two prancing and...

A one shot that popped into my head. -Shakes fist at cloud- Anyway, took a quick break from scene 12 and hammered this out. Dedicated to my beta readers, Mirage and eduril for wrestling with my atrocious comma usage and grammar. Anyway... enjoy! This may go further, I don't know. I don't like writin...

Still really enjoying this. Keep it up! Thanks meow! Reviews like this keep me going :D That is one hell of a gift for Fujiko and Misha. And judging from the fact that You never see Shizune's room(at school anyways), and she only comes into your room once, I think Shizune actually could have been s...