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First of all, welcome to the forums! I'll try to focus more on the larger issues than nitpicking at this time. My most immediate piece of advice is to double space your lines. That way, you get a clear separation between paragraphs. Next, you seem to be missing a lot of punctuation; in particular, a...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Last By the time I realise exactly what I’m doing, I’m already doing it. My lips press against Hanako’s. She immediately goes rigid and her eyes go wide. Just as quickly, she relaxes, and I feel just how soft and full her lips are. Han...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Last By the way the background volume in the room dies down, I figure Saki and Lilly have finished singing. As expected, they’re winding themselves down from the effort. Mom traipses around the room, tempting people to have the next go...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Last “So, what were you really t-talking about?” she asks. “That was pretty much it, actually. But hey, you’ve got nothing to worry about; we all reckon you’re pretty good.” “You’re just saying that because it’s my birthday party…” “I’...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Last Naomi sends a wink my way in approval. Natsume, on the other hand, just rolls her eyes and extracts a gift bag stashed behind a potted plant. Together, they stride over to Hanako and hand it to her, chirping ‘Happy birthday!’ at t...

The Purest Form of Love - Chapter 7: Third Time's the Charm First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Last [Emi] “Do you need a hand, Lilly?” I ask, extending my hand towards the girl on the bus. “No, no, I’m quite alright, thank you Emi,” Lilly replies, stepping gracefully on...

If I may, I'd like to ask anyone who might have further comments to refrain from posting at the current time. I've been informed that the previous page is currently being broken by the length of my posts. I'm working on a solution to that which will hopefully be resolved in the next 24 hours. Man, ...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Next Together, Hisao, Rin and I head out of the school building. The afternoon sun still has a bit of heat to it, leading to many of the students outside taking shelter under the shade of the many trees around the grounds. As we approa...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Next The first periods of the day come to a close, and students begin filing out of their rooms for lunch. Room 3-3 isn’t far away, but I need to be there as soon as possible to minimise any chance of missing the dynamic duo from the N...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Next I stretch out on my bed and relax for a good few minutes before I decide I shouldn’t keep putting it off. I fish out my phone from my pocket and hit the speed dial for mom. It rings a few times before the woman on the other end pi...

First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Next The journey passes rather quickly, owing to Hanako’s excited pace. Between the walk and the small talk, I notice that Lilly appears slightly unfocused. I pay it no mind; she’s probably just a bit tired. I wouldn’t be surprised if ...

The Purest Form of Love - Chapter 6: Second is the Best First | Previous | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Next [Emi] Focus. On what? The finish line. How do you get there? By running. And what does it take to win? Doing it faster than everyone else. “On your marks!” Get in position. G...

Oh, look. I caught up. I told you I had been meaning to read this and now I can say I have. It only took six hours between all the distractions. Now it's time to join the waiting game like everyone else. I don't mind, if it's for a story of such quality as this.

I have to say, upon seeing this thread my first thought was something along the lines "oh yay, another new poster jumping right into the deep end with a pseudo-route". I pray that you forgive me for being so cynical and jaded. It has been disappointingly frequent as of late for new writers...