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by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Apr 03, 2014 8:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 76586

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread

I kinda have to agree with the general consensus that that was a little to far to go...
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Mar 31, 2014 2:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 738323

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 37 up 3/

For him and her to work it would have needed to be only her from the start like a route. Since Hisao changes to match the girls more route to route he would change to match her more and adopt a more carefree attitude and become a better match for him
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Mar 27, 2014 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 738323

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 37 up 3/

And in one chapter I go from not liking noriko to really liking her quite a lot
by monkeywitha6pack
Tue Mar 18, 2014 11:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 93809

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! St. Pat Update

So I get really mixed up with he timeline stuff so this may sound stupid but has Oji been in past stories?
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Mar 14, 2014 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 76586

Re: Hanako's Secret (Oneshot)

I thought this was going to be a nice sappy story, then when I read naurutard I had to put my ipad down and just laugh for a minute. Idc about the littles things I found the hilarious bravo
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Mar 13, 2014 3:52 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 21-11-2016)
Replies: 172
Views: 112187

Re: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 3/2)

It's for a fan fic so it has to be a specific outfit with her (somehow) in heels.
by monkeywitha6pack
Wed Mar 12, 2014 9:48 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 21-11-2016)
Replies: 172
Views: 112187

Re: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 3/2)

I got commissioned (for free but it's still a commission) to draw emi and I have been stuck for months on her feet, feet are the bane of my existence. Also the Akira helping lilly brush her teeth is one if my favorite fan art I have seen
by monkeywitha6pack
Wed Mar 12, 2014 2:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Series of Short Stories
Replies: 14
Views: 6002

Re: A Series of Short Stories

Glad to see you back to writing :D I read your other stuff when you posted it back in oct. and really liked it, but I was wondering when you had Hisao kick the ball away was that insinuating Hisao was the one how did it?
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Mar 10, 2014 11:00 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases
Replies: 16
Views: 8370

Re: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases

You just described exactly me and my thought process. I was going to come back here and post some more onto my first comment but you just covered pretty much what I would have said
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Mar 09, 2014 12:15 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases
Replies: 16
Views: 8370

Re: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases

I decided to finish my hole story before posting to make sure it was the best it could be and I have found some good points and bad points Good 1. There is no strict deadline. You get less stressed if you can't work on it for a month 2. People don't need to wait to see the next installment. People d...
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Mar 07, 2014 11:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
Replies: 15
Views: 6946

Re: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue

I really liked the idea of bad end hanako leading to Hisao and Lilly together, I just feel this went way to fast and by doing so you missed some details
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Mar 07, 2014 11:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 123664

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

I'll tell you the same thing I tell every author worried about not posting enough, quality over quantity. I'd rather see one post that took a month and is a great chapter then forced rushed chapters once a day
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Mar 06, 2014 2:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 916
Views: 716520

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

I feel that Lilly's father had a good balance of a-holeness this chapter. I mean when I saw it was him joining them I was expecting him to not even want Hisao there, but he let him be there and actually talked to him without throwing insults his way
by monkeywitha6pack
Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 93809

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Lent Update

Mirage_GSM wrote:Did I miss the reason Lilly is on withdrawal or did you not provide any?
She gave up caffeine for lent, I guess she was super addicted to it