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I'm no longer a lurker! Hehe, well I love all the lurkers that follow this story (Here and on Fanfiction.net), but I always enjoy seeing new comments. :) I like this chapter mainly because it made me smile :P. I can’t ask much more from my writing than to make people smile. :D This is exactly how I...

So, I really really like this chapter, it was a ton of fun to write. Now all I can do is hope everyone else likes it as much as I do. feedback is as always greatly appreciated. Thanks again to Mirage for his excellent proofreading skills. Enjoy! Defeat? “Morning,” I yawn, falling into step beside H...

So many Spaced references… Dammit now I need to re-watch that show.

Glorious Victory (At last!) “That was two seconds slower,” Ryouta calls, staring at his phone. What? No that’s impossible. “W… what?” I pant, hands on my knees, trying to force air into my protesting lungs. Step it up boys, I only need one of you… I think. “Oh, no wait, it’s nought point two second...

The ghost story chapter I did like. It just felt somewhat off to suddenly have these other classmates appear and acting friendly and familiar with the others when there hadn't even been a mention of them before. A brief introduction wouldn't have hurt. Thats a fair point. I swear that ghost story i...

As long as it's an interesting story then I don't mind a long read, and you've created a very interesting story. :lol: Thanks! :D --- Another new reader :D Welcome! 1 You seem to be following the KS timeline however, Miki came in at the beginning of the school year. I’m not sure what you mean by th...

Blank Mage wrote: Also, since Summer's Clover happened, is Miki/Suzu canon? It certainly seems to be. Not that I'm going to argue, because I ship it.

I don't think so, not officially anyway - but its very popular headcanon. As much to do with the Suzu route as it is with Summer clover I think.

Aha, another connoisseur of Miki dream sequences. I like it. As other people have said it is very dark, which for me had extra effect because I never know if I should be prepared to laugh or cry with your work.

Nice job!

swampie2 wrote:I hadn't had a chance to dive into this fic until just now, but I'm enjoying the ride!

I look forward to the next chapter

Thanks!

Lovely to see a new reader. I worry that as the story gets longer it becomes more intimidating to dive into.

Thanks to Mirage_GSM for his editing/proofreading. Enjoy! Running Into You I shouldn’t laugh, not even giggle at this. Before me stands Hisao, in typical Yamaku gym kit, complete with tiny red shorts. He fidgets, trying to pull his t-shirt down further than the material will ever stretch. Cute. “He...

Sorry it’s taken me awhile to reply someone got me hooked on RWBY. :D I know more happened in this chapter, but I'm mainly just glad Ryouta and Ikuno are gonna talk it out. It really annoys me when a couple gets into an argument(or even worse, breaks up) over a misunderstanding, mainly because it di...

A Note on Settling Dust How can it have only been five minutes? It’s felt like two hours since I last allowed myself to look at the clock, mounted below the sun faded flag in room 3:3. My eyes ache, the dim morning sun that I watched rise now reflects cruelly off every surface. Moutou stands before...

Yay! 4K views, thanks so much everyone. Hope you’re enjoying the story so far. Many thanks to Mirage_GSM for his proofreading skills. As always feedback is greatly appreciated. Enjoy! Fallout I plummet silently towards the water, it’s icy blackness fills my vision as a scream tears at my throat. Br...

Well I chose a hell of a time to come back(been busy reading RWBY fanfiction, I tend to do that when I get into something new. Love that show.) Thought I hadn’t see you around in awhile, nice to have you back. I had no idea roster teeth made anything like that, I normally only watch the GTA5 let’s ...

Thank you for adding those links, especially the first one. I don't know how I didn't find that one on a Google search. It's not much in the way of additional research, but I (tried) to go a few days with one eye shut/covered. I wanted to experience for myself what it would be like. Simply put, it ...